| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
| Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mini-poll response: IMO, your chapters could stand to be a little longer! ^_^ Its all a tease, I tell you! I know that MM has that damnable cut-off point; this other story that I'm reading, for some reason the lates chapter ends in mid-paragraph, and it can't be fixed. Irritating as hell. So, if you can get your chapters longer without hitting the brick wall, so to speak, then I'm a happier magpie. XD Good luck!
|
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: March 10, 2006 21:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter! Miroku speculating on Kagome's choice of unders - what a hoot! And who could that appetizing female in town possbily be? I'm so confused. ;-) Readers mini-poll: I have absolutely NO problem with long chapters. The longer, the better, and keep 'em coming. Great writing, as usual. Can't wait for more - I also can't wait until InuYasha puts some serious hands on Kagome - it's going to be a revelation! Merci!
|
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 20:09 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeah!! Shopping for panties with a wad of cash in her pocket!! I like how she pushes all his buttons and he can't back down from her.. great stuff - looking forward to learning more about The Sachi
|
Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: March 10, 2006 16:53 PST
Comment/Review:
*smiles* she got the hat off!!!! YAY!!!!! i liked this chap a whole damn lot. please update soon.
|
Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood (Not logged in..) On: March 10, 2006 12:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Excellent chapter! I especially loved the debate between Kagome and Inuyasha at the Cafe! :P That was amusing to read and visualize! Anyways, to answer your question as far as the lengths of your chapters, I personally have always loved longer ones. In fact, to me the longer the chapter the better. :) So, if you were asking if it was okay to make them longer, I'd say 'wonderful'! Of course, just getting an update is wonderful to me, no matter the length, but I still find longer chapters more desirable. :) Well...hope that helps. Take care, until next time! And awesome job so far, love the way everything is progressing! :D
|
Reviewed By: spookeymelichan nsi On: March 10, 2006 11:56 PST
Comment/Review:
I don't mind the longer chapters I could easily have read this one and the last in one sitting. But spliting them up the way you have been is fine with me too. :) It was fun seeing Yasha reflect on the morning with kagome he's just adorible isn't he?! and yay for sango!!!!!!! As always I am looking forward to the next chapter. I think you easily the best IY ficcy authors I am currently following keep up the good work I really enjoy how you write all the characters.
|
Title: YEAH, another chapter already
Reviewed By: Mazukys On: March 10, 2006 11:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. The length of the last chapter was completely acceptable, but I enjoy the longer chapters too, since we get so much more story at one sitting! Whatever you can update with will be appreciated!!!
|
Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 10:31 PST
Comment/Review:
I love it can;t wait for another chapter
|
Reviewed By: cailin7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 09:51 PST
Comment/Review:
Definitely go with the longer chapters! You've got a great writing style and that makes reading your stories a pleasure. I'm always depressed when I reach the end and realize I've got to wait (I'm not a very patient person) for the next installment.
|
Reviewed By: scerpixy5 On: March 10, 2006 09:22 PST
Comment/Review:
I think that a long chapter is better to read than a short one. If it has 12,00 words that is fine with me. The more words the better. I love the fact that your chapters are long, plus it helps that your story is so interesting that it dosen't matter that the chapters are long. I really do love this story and hope that you continue to write it.
|
Reviewed By: loulou8125 On: March 10, 2006 09:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I love it when Inuyasha just can't seem to back down from a challange no matter what it is. As far as the chapter length goes...if you want to break a long chapter in half, that seems fine. Many authors do that and suprise their readers with the other half the next day. If I have time before I go to work, I read long loooong stories and chapters. I mean really it's up to you but It doesn't matter to me. Keep up the great writing. :)
|
Title: Nice Story!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very enjoyable story. It is well written and fun to read. It is amazing how you've managed to keep them so much in character in spite of having them in a completely different environment. I look forward to more chapters as they are posted.
|
Title: yeah!!!
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 18:49 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you see that you updated! I've been looking forward to this story developing. I like where you have taken them so far, and I'm looking forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: March 03, 2006 21:11 PST
Comment/Review:
i liked this chap. great job, please update soon.
|
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 03, 2006 20:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see your new chapter. I am really getting into this story and am overjoyed that we might get another quick installment. The new developments, in K and I's relationship, are getting very interesting. I can not wait for the next chapter. I know Shippo is plotting and I love the way K and I play off of each other. Thank you, Cynbad146
|
| Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] |
