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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 00:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me WHY is this fic on the featured list when NOTHING has been posted for a year.!!! I love your story and I think this is a great fic. I also think you are one of the best authors of fan fics that I have read on MediMiner. But I am sick and tired of authors who write great fics and then decide not to finish them just when it gets good!!. AT least have the respect for your readers who like me, have patiently followed this story and complete it with the LAST chapter or an EPILOUGE! PLEASE JUST FINISH THIS STORY ALREADY Thank you, J PS: I am not trying to single you out on this subject. I am just frustrated with ANY author that doesn't complete their stories who post on ANY fan fiction site
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 20, 2008 07:44 PST
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Where are you Quillwing717? Is this story a done deal? I sure would like to know what happens in the end (after the cliffhangers.) This story is so well written. I am going to miss it. Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 18:40 PST
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dude are u still alive?
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 18:31 PST
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this really is a well written and incredibly interesting story. I'm very excited to see more whenever you can update. thanks for sharing!
| Title: Sachi
Reviewed By: rowdyjaner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 11:36 PST
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you are a brilliant writer. this story flows so beautifully, like rich syrup from a pitcher. the characters are full and real, deep and filled with emotions. however, you haven't updated since feb 2007 and that is bad. long chapters are fine, even if they are 50,000 words - no problem. but no chapters... well, that simply isn't acceptable. i think i am going to have to send my minions to find you and make you write until you finish all of your stories. of course, i will have to acquire minions first. there are just so many petty details involved in being an evil genius. please save me the effort (as i a very lazy) and update this story. O_O PLEEEEEASE!
| Reviewed By: WhiteLuna On: November 16, 2007 10:56 PST
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I just got around to reading this chapter, and that was absolutely the sexiest. Love it, love it and can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 00:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! no no no no no no no no it can't stop there! *destroys things in nearest vicinity* *headdesk* Gods woman, that was kickass! halfway decent my ass, that was superb! I so wanted Kagome to pull him back into another kiss, just to prove it wasn't a mistake. grrr. and ahaha, she growled at him! and finally threw something, albeit a pillow. lol. but whew! that was awesome. overused word, sure, but damn. awesome. I so want to read more! you've got yourself a highly dedicated reader now girl, so be ready! for what, I'm not entirely sure. lol. Rest assured that you'll always have a review for every single chapter from this chick. Thus! Update soon, and I shall shower you with praise! The world and characters you've crafted are addicting, and I reallyyyyyyyyyy want to know what happens next. So take pity, and give us more of your brillance! ^-^ -Your overly excitable reader/reviewer, Aurelia. Here's a giant interdimensional mallet to smash the hell out of writer's block, if it ever strikes again. There's a reason you're a featured author, you know. Pure awesomeness. ^-^ ja!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(white again, dammit!) heheheheeh. numbskull. aha! great word. ^-^ I've been trying to think of the right words to describe this story, besides the overused "awesome" and "wonderful". Basically, to me, it's positively charming. Magnetically so, drawing the reader in. And then, after that, intense, in an almost slice-of-life way. Normal day to day things with a comical twist, and accompanying emotional potentcy. *I loves it!!* It's exactly the sort of close relationship fueled activity that people yearn for. And shogi has become such a great part of the story. XD oooooooo citrus coming up!!!! *claps happily* With all this crafted tension, I'm sure you'll do just fine. But man, only one more chapter left for me to read. T-T boooo. The POV's are quite a favorite of mine. ^-^ Onto the highly anticapated chapter11!!!! wheee!!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I love all those little signs. But is it really Shippou, or another trick/treat of the mysterious Sachi. I suppose only you're hairdresser knows for sure.XD As for my impression of the story, besides the obvious fact that I adore it (and only two more chapters left! ahhhh!no!) here goes: Inuyasha has an obvious past linked with Miroku, I'm guessing the obvious Kikyo (who's name has never been mentioned yet. hmm) and kaede and shippou also involved. I believe naraku is behind it somehow, and Sango's been sent to take care of Inuyasha... somehow. I'm not sure if she knows about Miroku, and his connection. Kagome's made a promise (either to herself or someone close to her) to "keep running". Definitely interested to see how that will play out. Judging by her sudden appearance in the national forest, it seems like she was either a. meant to be killed or b. critically hurt and meant to be sent to inuaysha somehow. I'm thinking she's still got miko powers, but I guess I'll have to wait and see. Miroku also wants to make some profit off of the knowledge that shippo's dad imparted, but it doesn't seem devious. just opportunist. lol. I think that's pretty much it so far, although I've probably forgotten something. I really really realllyyyyyy want to know more about Kagome's necklace, and her past. I'm intrigued, damnit! ^-^ great chapter. I'm usually totally focused on Inuyasha/kagome interaction, but even the sango/miroku interaction is pulling me in. Well done! Great writing. ^-^
| Title: Glue
Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO, hot springs? That must definitely be made use of in this fic, or I shall be sorely disapointed. ^-^ also, you've been added to my favorite authors list here on MM. Be excited! XD *bursts into laughter* GLUE! Genius. nice use of sound effects. whump indeed. lol I love shippou. ^-^ as always, NICE CHAPPY!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ever-intriguing plot twist of women's underwear. Heheheh, always good. ^-^ Sango! If I'm correct, she's the one Naraku was ordering around in the prologue. (red eyes and whatnot.) Uh oh. Miroku's gonna be in over his head when he bumps into her again. Which he has to. ^-^ and Kagome still doesn't know that she had a gunshot wound, correct? Hmmm. interesting. as for the length of the chapter, I've always thought the longer the better. But if it means getting new chapters out sooner, then totally shorter. ^-^ Or actually, I'd prefer to have more to read at once. So my final answer is: longer the better! >.> nevermind the unintentional innuendo. Oi. *claps* Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really impressed with the way you write Kagome. Inuyasha is absolutely perfect, but Kagome- it's like she's real, you know? She's not a flat character all like "OMG I lost my memory, oh well I'll shack up with this hot hanyou". There's real emotion there, and you portray the feeling of amnesia- being completely unconnected without memories- in a wonderfully believeable way. I'm also starting to wonder when it wil really hit her- when the first time she'll cry will be. I'm guessing it's gonna be intense. "Hey…. That top." For a moment, he sounded strange--somewhere between uncomfortable and amused. "I like that one. Bring it with you." *squees* TEH CUTENESS. *runs around in little circle* I love that shit! XD and the scene out in front of the lingerie shop- mmmmmmmm turbulent and turned on Inuyasha. mwahahah. As always, so much fun to read!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:03 PST
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Miroku: "A kiss, perhaps?" ahahah, he would say that! As for the kitchen scene, I thought it was wonderful. Tension, the fall, the SNOW. You put so much emotion (and secrets) and thought into the way you write the characters- and it clearly shows. The mark of a very good writer. and writer's block, AUGH. The most hated of all the blocks, lol. Sometimes it can be broken by the simplest thought, and sometimes you just gotta sit down and write, then rewrite, then throw it all out the window, set things on fire, and begin again. All in all, a very gorgeous and slow build up of heart thrumming contact. ^-^ *big thumbs up*
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 20:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter I keep thinking that it can't get any better, and then it just magically does. ^-^ This story is so much fun to read! Parts actually make me break out in a full blown grin, and I love it. Onto chapter five I go!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 01:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful. ^-^ wait, let's put some more 4am excitement into that. TOTALLY KICKASS MASTER WRITER-SAMA!!!!1111one. The atmosphere in the kitchen scene was thick. I actually leaned closer to the computer screen to read faster before I realized it. ^-^ bed now, but I shall be back tomorrow to read & review! *insert maniacal laughter here.*
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