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Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few typos, but nothing that really distracted from the enjoyment of the story. You are a master of building sexual tension and then thwarting the logical conclusion that is highly frustrating but will make the eventual ending all the sweeter. I loved the misunderstanding between Inu Yasha and Kagome when Kagome finally decided to talk to him about the unwelcome advances of Mr. Hidaka. A part of me wants to insist that the two youkai were, in fact, Mr. Hidaka and his wife. This is one of my favorite stories and I am always excited to receive that little email that tells me you have updated. Take care! I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:46 PDT
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I can't possibly imagine why you feel as though you've messed up somehow. I'll be the first to admit that when I get caught up in a story, I don't really pick up on any errors unless it's something completely off the wall, but for what it's worth, I didn't see any spelling/grammatical mistakes. LOL! Having said that, I was so intently trying to figure out what/who the new guest was, screaming with joy at the citrus, and then back to trying to solve the mystery, that you could have launched a grenade at me and I wouldn't have noticed. :) I'm guessing the "him" is Sesshomaru, and I'm dying to see how he fits in this. I'd been hoping/waiting/wondering if Kagome's powers were going to come into effect here, although I was hoping she'd use it on that nasty piece of work they have as a guest. Your updates always make it worth the long wait we have to endure. I hope you're also not going to forget about "Waiting on a Wish" which is my absolute favorite fanfic ever. Great job and I can't wait to read more. :)
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:19 PDT
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Thank you for the new chapter! It's so great to have a chance to read more of your story! There's no need to worry about your latest chapter - everything flows well and is quite believable. I'm glad to see them finally start to settle their "frustrations" with each other, and with a new twist as well! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Don't take too long! -OW
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. I can't believe it took a turn like that but i was expecting she would be a miko. But by gosh, they just started to reveal how much they like each other, to the other, and they have to have this happen! Why would you do this to us and them? By the way, where's sango? Does she know Kagome? I can't wait to see where you go from here. No really, can't wait. Please, for all things good, update as soon as you can and not later.
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: July 20, 2008 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it!!! Excitment and romance and awhole lot of other emotions that kept me glued to the whole story. I will look forward to your nexted installment and will most likely enjoy that one when it's recieved as much as this one...Thank you for updating it's been awhile.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: July 20, 2008 18:24 PDT
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WELL DONE! Something's finally happening! I think there needs a little polishing, but I love this update, even though so much is left hanging now! I hope you have the opportunity to continue this marvelous story soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 18:21 PDT
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Hooray, an update from Quill! This was wonderful. Full of drama and angst and rage and excitement and grief and...and... Very well done, I'm still loving this. Enjoy your week sweetie, you deserve it!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYY YAYY YAYY YAYYY YAYYY I SOOO LOVE U!! ehem... I mean great job....
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Reviewed By: Hentai SouljaShoujo On: June 12, 2008 16:30 PDT
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I t seems it has taken you a very long time to update but hey unlike writers who never finish or have completely forgotten about it is alot so carry on
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 11, 2008 21:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted you to know that I am still checking in on occasion, hoping for one of your wonderful updates (to either of your ongoing stories!) I definitely miss your chapters. (Some of the best that I have ever read.) Please do not give up on such a grand spin of a yarn. I'll keep checkin' in. Come back please, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 12:54 PDT
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Thank you very much for the update, not to mention the introduction of new characters. Are they from kagome's past? Will they meet at the sachi? and if they do, how will inuyasha and the others react? Please answer they questions at the beginning of the next chapter. Thank you also for reassuring us that you will finish the story, it's my favorite one, but we would love you soooo much if you were to gift us all with a new chapter.(my B-day is june 19th. Gift... get it?)Pleeease, oh one who is brilliant in their writing style!
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Reviewed By: kazumi1234 On: April 25, 2008 17:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you updated! It's been a while and I was starting to thing that you had given up on this story, but I'm very pleased to know that you have not. I love the storyline, the mystery and suspense of the characters' pasts makes reading it so enjoyable and intense. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read every single word from beginning to end up to your latest update... and I must say... I have never been quite so taken as I am now with this fic. It's... it's absolutely...amazing. It has a splendiferous quality to it that I've never quite seen before. Any reader in their right mind can tell right away the intricate way in which each chapter has carefully been put together. And the time well spent in doing so. I get anxious everytime I move on to the next page. Your fic has really drawn me in... into the world in which The Sachi is located, and I must say that I regret having to leave that world until your next update. I am sorry for not having reviewed all of the past chapters. Though it would look so much better on your part for you review count, I believe it would be just tad bit redundant on my part for you to have to keep on reading a short little review from the same reader. So to save you time and effort in reading my lame and short reviews (though I usually don't leave short reviews) I thought it would be best for me to leave a long and highly detailed one. That shows my level of gratitude in your writing this fic. InuYasha and Kagome's characters in this fic have a quality about them that I am quite fond of. And Miroku's humorous sarcasm in which is unintentional yet natural for him, really livens up this story. Shippou's role in this fic plays a big part too in making this fic that much more desirable to read. And now at the end... when you go and add Souta and Rin! That really got me going! And I just know that the woman who broke Inu's poor heart all those years ago has GOT to be Kikyo. I'm just itching to know what happened between the two that has Inu acting the way he is. As for Sesshoumaru... I just know he has got to have an important role in this fic as well, right? If I have read correctly HE is the main reason why InuYasha and Miroku reside at The Sachi at all. Ah well I guess I will just have to wait for you next update then huh? Haha! I can't wait I really hope it will be soon. And I pray all is well with you, I seriously know how life can get in the way... and even bite you in the ass at times (I say this from present experience). I would just love to start on the second chapter of my newest fic... if I could just get passed the damned writers block and the frustrations my life has brought me thus far... *sigh* Oh well,we can't all win can we? But that doesn't mean I wou't put up a damned good fight! Until your next update that I eagerly await, Ja Ne ~Tusuke Kounami
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Title: an update :O !YAY!
Reviewed By: Kags- -dogboylover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 14:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, i'm reeeeally delighted that you are writing again :D i had never lost hope that you'd continue the story hihi hope you update soon *protects herself from a flying shoe*
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Title: GAH!! its a ghost
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weeehoo, it was just my grandma... More and more questions...I don't think that you'll have a problems getting people to read no matter how long it takes. Tell next time
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