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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 00:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am completely enthralled with your mysterious tale! The tensions between Kags and Inu, the way you've expanded on the basic characters, and the plot that just becomes more thrilling to unravel-- I'm just in awe. Each chapter is carefully constructed and the continuity between chapters is seamless. Your storyline is well executed and you stay true to Takahashi's original premises for her characters. Your point of view and depiction of an AU is both refreshing and exciting. I'm exceedingly happy that I found your piece of literature-- that's right, I'm calling it literature because it has all the correct assets of a literary piece! I am beyond enthused to read more.
| Reviewed By: DarkKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say ive really been enjoying this fic. after years of reading fanfiction ive kinda been feeling disapointed and bored by them for a while now but youre work is quite refreshing and im genuinly interested to know what will happen next. yay. lol
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 02:10 PDT
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Me starting off a review like this isn't very original (never are mind you) but i think "Sachi" is absolutely marvelous. I probably will always have a special spot for just anything InuYasha related now, and so in my spare time (the few minutes I can get) I like to sit down and read an Inu-fiction. Ive been doing readings and reviews for a couple of years now and Ive seemed to develop very high expectations and hunger for unique quirks in a story. Unfortunately they are hard to come by which means I have only a few favs that (to me) really bring that extra kick. and that is noticed either in the writers cleanly put details in sentences, well structured vocab, beautifully captured the characters personalities and inner growth during the story and not to mention just the plot itself being unique. im thrilled to say to you have all the above checked on my list of things I look for. You are a superb writer! You may not think so yourself and Im happy you don't. Being unsatisfied helps you improve more. Also if you didn't then I would find that snobbish. lol. But your a far cry from that lovely! To tell you the truth I read this when it first came out (I was ,and am still today, a fan of "Waiting on a wish" and I was waiting for that to be complete. still am) but I didn't review because of my schedule. i did do a brisk run through but doing that didn't let me understand what was going on so I left it be for now. i came back yesterday to read right from chapter one again and I really then appreciated your work. as you can see Im already done reading your latest update. I have to say me fav part of your writing is the perfect slow building romance and trust relationship of InuYasha/Kagome and of coarse in this exact story it is the InuYasha perv thoughts and the sexual play of words. For example instead of saying he wanted to f*** her you wrote how he wanted to lick her body and how long he has been deprived of sex. and i admit the turmoil for him is funny especially when he is talking to Miroku. lol. It is indeed that you Quill, are a writer to adore and worship. I am quite frankly honored to write this review or you and i apologize for not doing others before. That will change! I know updates are hard to come by often but I do wish to see more of the InuYasha/Kagome concoction soon. That means I need "Sachi"! I simply can't get enough yet....
| Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in! Too lazy!) On: July 29, 2008 21:57 PDT
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*Just a warning: this review was written under the influence of pixie stix* You are an evil, evil person. That was such a promising turn of events until the end when those youkai showed up! Gah! You are cruel and I demand you make things better right now so those two can get together (haha, so much fun to make unreasonable demands on another author!). Well, now that I am done complaining about what a terrible person you are and making rediculous demands, it was a really good chapter! You are seriously your own worst critic, because I thought it was great! The misunderstanding was hilarious, and I am dying to see what happens with the pervert guest. It was just too promising a set up to let drop, so I hope you have him find out somehow. I'm sure it'll get ugly, too! I'm just going to try to ingore the more serious part of the plot because I'm still in denial about it because it is getting the way of their relationship. I much prefer the fun, messy stuff! :-P So are you done with the next chapter yet? I just finished my last summer class today (A's in both English Comp II and Statistics!) and that deserves some sort of reward, right? Of course! LOL Actually, I've just got wayyy too much time on my hands now, so I need entertainment...I'll be looking forward to the next installment!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful... thanks for the update... Please do something with that guest who is rude to kags..
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful... thanks for the update... Please do something with that guest who is rude to kags..
| Reviewed By: KiraInawa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude wow this whole story is just amazing. you're doing an awesome job on keeping whatever they're hiding a secret. i know who it's about i just don't know what it's about (the only reason i know who is cause i read quite a few stories to guess who your kinda talking about) but still good cause i have no idea what it's about well keep up the good work peace out.
| Reviewed By: Kags- -dogboylover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 12:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, amaaaaaazing chapter!!!! really wonderful, i almost laughed my head off while reading the part where kagome is telling inuyasha about her little problem and he completely misunderstands it. LOL hihihi anyway, now you left us hanging on an enormous cliff, and it would be really meanie of you to take too long to save us from it =DD Looking forward to the next update ^.^
| Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 23:37 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Those damn worms couldn't have just waited 10 more minutes. I still love this chapter. Great job, please update soon.
| Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:09 PDT
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I hate the fact that your chapters are so good. I am longing to see what happens next. I know how it is when you don't have time to write a new chapter and you want it to be good so good luck with the next one. Ooo I'm so excited I don't know what to do with myself!
| Reviewed By: Inukunsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 03:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! this is amazing! I hate it the way you tease with the sexual tension but it makes it so good!! *squeels* ^_^ i love it!
| Title: Nice!!
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 22:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't re-write it, I think you did a wonderful job on this chapter, and on all your chapters. This is one of the stories that I really look forward to reading. Keep up the good work and update as often as you can. Later! ^_~
| Reviewed By: InusDemones(N.S.I.) On: July 21, 2008 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well just damn! They were finally about to stop torturing themselves and me and get it on! And then a demon has to show! ~sigh~ Don't worry you didn't mess the chapter up at all. It was totally believable; I wouldn't be this upset over the suspense if it was! More please? And also; Twilight, Twilight, Twilight!
| Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: July 21, 2008 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No don't rewrite - it's perfect. It would be amazing if the next day she grabbed his head and scream and ask Inuyasha to make all the memories stop - her memory returns to fast and gives her a very terrible shock. Like the complete and utter annihilation of her family - brother, mother, and grandpa. Just a thought. I loved it - they are in love and hate to admit it too! I can't wait to read chapter 14.
| Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Quillwing. WOW, it is good to hear from you again. I've been waiting on an update from you in forever!!!!! I can honestly say that when I saw the autonotification thing in my mailbox, I keeled over in hysterical laughter. I am so serious. I am addicted to your writing, and I'm glad you finally graced us (your readers) with your presence. I liked the chapter, it was great, and intriguing. A little sexual flare, and the induction of the creepy old man and his doting wife was unexpected. I kinda knew that Inu and Kag weren't going to go all the way, 'cause, come on, this is your first update in a long time and I know we all hope you will beg our forgiveness with a little lemony goodness, but really, we know in our heart of hearts that there ain't going to be anything of the sort. As for the typos, there were about four or five (I'm a freak for counting huh?), but for some reason you are the only writer that I can't get pissed at for that kind of stuff. To tell you the truth, this chap didn't give me the kind of chills that I usually get from reading the others. Don't get me wrong, it was well written, and I loved it, but I think it's because it was kinda just a "bait chapter" if you understand what I'm saying. You know, like it's going to lead to something incredible in the next one. I came to this conclusion all on the account of the revelation of Kagome's powers, and the vague hints to the Sachi's members elusive pasts. But overall, I really enjoyed it, and I hope that you will update this and your other fic really soon. You are without a doubt my favourite writer on this and all other sites, and I hope to read another one of your brilliant chapters really, really, really soon *hint hint*. Ja ne! PS: I have also written a fic (a oneshot), inspired by your writing ability, and your fearlessness to post your talent and be openly critiqued by others. It's called FATED and a review from you would really make my day. Never let others bring you down, and continue to flourish in this, your destined sanctuary.
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