| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
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Reviewed By: whoo120292 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 19:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese finish it! i love it. its so good.
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Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 14:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read --and believe me when I say I read a lot. The mistery of the whole plot and the stunning sexual tension between Inuyasha and Kagome are absolutely captivating. I adore how you placed subtle hints of humor in this story by way of Miroku and Shippo. You're very successful with the characterizations. I am amazed not only with your writing style, but also with the richness of the vocabulary you use. I am sorry to see that you will not continue writing Waiting on a Wish. I sincerely hope that you'll finish this one for it would be a crime if you did not. I'll wait to see the end of Sachi no matter how long it takes.
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Reviewed By: Gauri On: January 11, 2009 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGGG! The story is really really great. PLEASE update soon!
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Title: pleasse
Reviewed By: --916q367940 9619499401107320-- [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 05:13 PST
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its been 6 monthsss when are you going to update??
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 03:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just re-read this whole thing again... I still dont understand what the first chapter is all about... but I guess that is to be revealed more and more as the story goes on...
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Reviewed By: chibiyasha On: October 08, 2008 08:02 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfiction! Its amazing! The twists, tension ;) Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you update soon! :D :D
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: September 25, 2008 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Knock! Knock! Who's there? Your freindly neighborhood fic fan who really really hopes that you might update soon. I so love your stories. Just checking in with you, Quillwing. Hope to read you soon! Best wishes that all is well. Cynbad146 p.s. I so love this story!!!!!)
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Reviewed By: ,khuw;ugh On: September 25, 2008 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When Smart People Do Stupid Things Makda Desta 25/9/08 Why does it seem that some of the smartest people on the planet are the ones doing some of the stupidest things? Now I'm not talking about trying to cut your hair with fire or describing fish as the chicken of the sea. What I am talking about involves intelligent people over-analyzing a simple problem, and coming up with a ludicrous complex solution. For instance, not long after the moon landing NASA discovered something - ballpoint pens could not work in outer space. So what did NASA do, you ask? They spent close to a billion dollars designing and creating a new kind of pen. This pen could not only write in zero gravity, it could also withstand the heat of up to 500 degrees Fahrenheit, write underwater, and was nearly impossible to break. The Russians' used a pencil. Not exactly NASA's proudest moment. Its incidents like that which causes me to raise the question, how stupid can you get? Did it never occur to the scientists of NASA that instead of wasting taxpayer's money they could just come up with something a little simpler? Like a pencil! Did they even try of thinking of any other options before diving into their 'Pen project'? In addition, more importantly does this mean that Russia is - dare I say it- smarter then the U.S? Nevertheless, I am not only talking about America. I am talking about all the intellectual snobs in society. The ones that say I am dumb because I cannot see the meaning in a splat of paint on a canvas. Or see the hidden truths about fairytales. Does everything in life have to be a symbol? If a man opens the door for a woman, does it have to mean he is sexist? Can't it just mean he opened the door? Some people say that I am stupid, that I do not understanding the true meaning of things. I just shrug my shoulders and say 'whatever'. But when a supposed genius makes a blindingly obvious mistake that make average Joe's/Jane's look like Steven Hawking I have to wonder, what's their excuse? I may never win a noble prize, or rated one of the top ten smartest people ever, but I do have something that many snobby know-it-alls apparently forget. Common Sense. And that is one thing you just can't teach.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: August 29, 2008 16:53 PDT
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so who's 'He'? What's gonna happen with the dude, since she obviously hadn't had a chance to tell him about it...?
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Reviewed By: inuaeryn On: August 20, 2008 21:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is more addicting then drugs! I love all of the twists and turns that it has taken. Absolutely fan-freakin-tastic! Love the general story idea and the secrets that are slowly being revealed. Not to mention the passion and tension between I/K! Looking forward to seeing more!
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Reviewed By: ~aquapearl~ On: August 18, 2008 00:45 PDT
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i luvvvvvvvv da story! itz awesum! i really want to knw wat happens nxt! keep up the good work! =]
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 03:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... this was too good... After reading this I can see why you titled it "Missed Communications". And how you put things together in this chapter was very well done... Hope you update the next chapter and keep doing that great job of yours, writing... Peace...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 19:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! Go, Kaggie! I can't believe she just told Yash the equivalent of "Just hurry up and ravish me." only to have a youkai interrupt them. And it doesn't seem like they'll be picking up where they left off anytime soon thanks to Kagome's spiritual powers coming out of the closet. Darn it. But the story is progressing very nicely. I just got through reading everything from the beginning up until now and I swear everytime it's been hard to put down. Naturally I've been trying to guess what'll happen next..and I'm stumped..but I think I know who Haku is, at least. I suppose even if I did guess the many twists and turns woven within "Sachi" are enough to still keep me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update, though. By the way...this isn't really relevant but for a good ten chapters I kept turning the title over in my head thinking "Sachi...isn't that a character?" before I realized "No, you idiot. That's Hachi!" Don't know why I felt the need to include that tidbit of information..but yeah. I'm loving the story so far! Continue! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you are truly an amazing author! I love all your stories and I am anxiously waiting for your next chapter as the plot becomes clearer. Don't leave us for too long! c ya
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Title: No worries
Reviewed By: altusluxlucis On: July 31, 2008 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it's hard once you've written to pull back far enough to judge your own work, but you should have no worries about this chapter. The action that you've included seems right in line with the ominous nature of the plot. Now that Kagome's settled in, it feels right to have the larger plot come back into play, especially while there are still parallel threads running loose. I swear the time it takes you to update is worth it. It absolutely makes my fangirl month ;).
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