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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 22, 2005 16:11 CST
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ohhh! I guess she couldn't bend it then could she? Or, did she want to... I hope his grove remains!
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Reviewed By: Blonde_Life On: February 21, 2005 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm what to say... what to say...? Well what is there to say besides I love this Fic! You make everything flow together so naturally that's it's not hard to picture it really happening. I love the way you bring to different world's together and make it work so well. Keep it going and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[wince] Snow belt? eek! I recommend the wonderful weather of NorCal... of course, excepting the 4 months of serious rain. Rest of the year, temp is usually b/t 45-80 degrees F. Love the story. I'm all for hiei kag pairings, but I'm curious how you'll manage it without one of them going OOC. It can be done- Hiei isn't a diehard bastard, despite what some writers think, and Kagome does have a serious side to her- but its rarely done plausibly. I look forward to reading more. Hell, I think I already reviewed this chapter, and am now reviewing the third revision of ch.2. [shrug]
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: sugar-chibi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^ oh my goodness! that was like, the most awesomest (is that a word?) story i have read in such a long time! when i got to the end of the first chapter, i was like What? thats it? And then i saw the next chapter button, and i was like, oh....a-hehehe. So all i would like to know, besides how you created such a wonderfully written story, is when you will next update? ^.^ ok, just wanted you to know that you write awesomely(word?) and yeah. -Sugar!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, innovative, captivating, and very sly. I loved your portrayal of the characters, and your unique twist to how YYH and IY could fit together. ...though if any two anime realms were to combine, those two seem to do it the best. In my opinion, at least. I hope you continue it!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaiigirlanime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your fanfic very original. I really think you should keep writing the story in my opinion it is great and I Can't waight to read what happens next.
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Title: The Guardian
Reviewed By: Arella Hallo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like this story. I hope despirately that you update. It would be very, very nice if you update. :-D
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 02, 2005 13:19 CST
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it is worth continuing... I haven't seen one like this with good spelling at all. ^^ I'm keeping an eye on it, so maybe you'll hear from me again, but I will keep reading it, no matter what the pairing is.
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, that's all I can say. This was really beautilfully writen and you just leave me hanging at the edge of my seat. You have to continue this work of yours. I would also like to saw that I would like Kagome to be with Kurama. I don't mind Hiei with her it's just in real life he wouldn't do that mussy stuff and say sweet words, he's a real badass and a mouth to boot. I've watched YYH uncut and man does he have a mouth! :-) Kurama, I think would be a better catch for Kagome, same with Yusuke but I'm guess your doing a Keiko/Yus pairing and I'm fine with that. Anyway, if you do pair up Kur and Kag, I would be really happy and same with Hiei and Kag. Now, I'm rambling, okay I'm done here....for now....UPDATE!!!XD *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv ur fic. Update soon. I say you should make it a Kag/Kur pairing just cuz I luv Kag/Kur paings!! I'm sorry but whenever a pairing is done with Hiei, Hiei is thrown way way way way OOC and I'm sorry, but some of the things that Hiei would say and do in those type of fics he would never do in reallity (sp?) I know this isn't reallity, but honestly. If you do decide to make it a Kag/Hiei, please don't majorly OOC Hiei. Well, this has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you goodbye.
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Reviewed By: Squirrel Girl On: February 01, 2005 19:53 CST
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hiei/Kagome please! Love the story so far!
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Reviewed By: DemonJackal On: February 01, 2005 15:47 CST
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This is an excellent start. Kudos on spelling, grammer and style. Kudos on not making Inuboy a terrible jerk in separating him from Kagome. I look forward to more of this, I like your idea that Kagome separted the realms - that's the first time I've seen that idea. I hope you pair her with Hiei, I too have a soft spot for the little fire/ice demon! Update S-0-0-N!!!
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Reviewed By: Jill's enjoyment On: February 01, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Please conitnue!!! Ooh, could you make it Hiei/Kagome... I have a soft spot for the little firecracker too! ^^ Heh, oh yeah, Inu no Taisho is their dad... it says so in the third movie I think... Can't remember... Anyway, great story, keep up the good work! ^^
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: February 01, 2005 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic so far but could you make this a Kagome/Kurama? Why well for one with Inuyasha he kept his feelings hidden although they where painfully obvious and insent Hiei the quiet type although Kurama is sorta to he seems more open er well never mind I just vote Kurama not that I have anything against Hiei. AHH! Anyways please update soon.Bye!
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