| "Pride and Honor REVISED" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: This rewrite is ok...
Reviewed By: HighfireX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe I liked the original fic better. It suites the theme of action well. But this is better than nothing. Also an excuse to get you moving. U_U Thanks for writing these fics.
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Reviewed By: MYEERGLEE On: March 26, 2005 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is pretty good... and you said to harass you all I wanted if you didn't update in one week... so I'm gonna at the end. Please update though, I really like this story so far and would like to see it continued. Now for the harassing: HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MYEERGLEE On: March 26, 2005 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is pretty good... and you said to harass you all I wanted if you didn't update in one week... so I'm gonna at the end. Please update though, I really like this story so far and would like to see it continued. Now for the harassing: HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MYEERGLEE On: March 26, 2005 23:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is pretty good... and you said to harass you all I wanted if you didn't update in one week... so I'm gonna at the end. Please update though, I really like this story so far and would like to see it continued. Now for the harassing: HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS HARASS!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: jofr On: March 09, 2005 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I somehow missed this revision for a whole month. I finally found it, and I hope you write more. I remember the first version... it wasn't so bad, but this one is definitely and improvement.
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Reviewed By: Inspector On: March 02, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THis is great material...keep it up man.
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you plan on adding to this story :) I really enjoyed it !!!!
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