| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: September 26, 2002 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG What a chapter!! Veggie has finally come to terms with his feelings for Bulma, not in a resentful manner but more calming like. His realization that the ritual almost took their lives (in particular the life of the woman he loves), and the regret of not being able to perform the tail union was somewhat sad. By the way the tail ritual is something I'd love to read about. Sounds pretty naughty to me ^_~. Anyway, I guess he had to resign himself to the fact that Vegetasei had been gone for a long time and he had been trying to hold on to its traditions and customs in an unrealistic way. Poor guy, you got to feel bad for him. Of course, the much anticipated lemon was awesome. You have a way of making their union seem so much more meaningful than lot of others that I read here and there. Usually I'm left with tears in my eyes because they're not only romantic and emotional, but spiritual in a way that would make most women wish they could experience something like that at least once in their lives *sighs*. Did that make any sense at all? Also, please don't apologize for taking a long time to update. I would wait 6 months for a chapter like this one. Kudos for such an excellent chapter and I'll be waiting patiently for the next one. Bravo girl!!
suenami927@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 13:55 CDT
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Goodness, gracious, that Goku and his appetite! LOL. This chapter was well worth the wait, don't worry about it! It was so nice to see Vegeta really caring about someone else. Let's hope his efforts can pull her out. With all of this excellent drama, I'm pulling for a happy reunion =) |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 11:32 CDT
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Ohhh! Great chapter, as usual. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's all that I'm going to say for now because this chapter is too good for words. I just hope Bulma will make it. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 05, 2002 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for taking the time to update. I know how hectic things are at the beginning of the school year. If it weren't for my coffee I'd probably end up in the local nut house. This chap was certainly worth waiting for. I can't believe Goku and his saiyan appetite when a life is hanging in the balance. Veggie has done all he can for B-Chan and I love it when he finally admitted to himself that he loves her *sighs*. I just hope that it isn't too late for her and that Kami can come up with something that will help B/V out. Again, Kudos for a chap very well done. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, don't sweat it, buddy!!! This chapter was most definitely worth the wait. Brilliant as always, I just hope that Vegeta can save Bulma in time...:) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey now! Vegeta just won, and now you got Bulma dieing. I can't take the suspence! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you just think you're too clever don't you? With this newest cliffhanger...ugh!
This was a terrific chapter...I'm glad the guardian and vegeta came to an understanding...the fight was awesome, several very cool twists.
Now just get Geta outta there so he can save the woman he loves right?
: ) Jada |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 12:26 CDT
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Curse you woman! What happens next?!
Hehe...that's DJ's way of saying it was an incredible chapter. Not that I expected any less, of course. ;) But don't leave us hanging for too long!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 12, 2002 08:02 CDT
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Yes, that was a mean place to leave it :) But that's okay. This chapter was intense!! I'm never disappointed in the twists & turns you add to the story. Now Bulma's in trouble... Sheesh. Hurry up and wake up Vegeta!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn cliffhangers!! OMG I hope the doctor can get Bulma to start breathing again. At least that worthless bastard is dead. That's what happens when you mess with the Prince of all Saiyans ^_^. Kudos on a great chap but I need mmmooorrreee!!! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Good:Vegeta won
The Bad:Bulma stopped breathing
The Hopeful:Her survival |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 14, 2002 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't mean to sound rude or anything, but i'm so glad you finally updated! i was beginning to loose hope! and indeed, that WAS a very evil place to end the chapter! please, oh please update soon!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yume On: July 27, 2002 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah!! the suspense is really killing me!! What a creative fanfic! =] |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 25, 2002 18:11 CDT
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Intriguing! Will Vegeta understand the messages in time?? We will have to wait until your next update! Aah! Love this story. |
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