| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was an awesome fanfic. I couldn't put it down when I started reading, but I had to sleep, to then continue reading it. It was fabulous. I love it. You had me guessing through a good portion of it. Great job.
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Title: Ahhh..
Reviewed By: Genome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After so many years, I've found you again! You don't know how happy I am. :) I've been waiting forever it seems for Saiyan Games to update over on FFnet, but lo and behold, here you are with the next part. And what's even better, is that even though it's over *crycry*, I'm glad that I need not wait any longer for any chapters. What can I say? Your skills are wonderful and refreshing. Everything remains so accurate, so real. I love the little bits of humor sprinkled here and there that just adds to the whole affect. Heehee! Spandex wedgie. I found myself spending 6+ hours just today reading sixteen chapters all at once, not to mention the 7 yesterday spent on the first ten plus rereading the SG. Wooboy, you are good. I'm looking forward to seeing what else lies hidden in your many other fics. =D
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Title: caramelheart
Reviewed By: caramelheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last a story that brings the most written about couple togather in an Original way!! Great storyline, action (especially), great lemon by the way... great everything. Two enthusiastic thumbs up!
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Title: Ahh, a refreshing blend of .. oh it's Hentai?
Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Na , very very very damn good. Charcter buildup, secret plots and plain descripiton - excellent. Description, style and umm ... Lemon . oh yeah lemon (Laughs)
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Reviewed By: saiyanborn_vakyra [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow..ember this is amazing i havent read that much into it but from what i have i am hooked...i read your fic feding genius in ff.net and loved it i must say i absolutely love your writing style..and i read saiyan games as well...your my new favorite author i hope your proud! you deserve it |
Reviewed By: waz-up On: May 08, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Two things: 1. The lemons weren't too good, it's like you read the whole story, you finally get to the best part and it turns out as a dud; you added too much perspective on the characters. 2. I didn't like the ending too much( it was soooooo SAD!) You had better write a sequal or somethin' 'cause that was a really bad ending. BUT, I really liked the story eventhough it took me 4 days to read, but, hey, the longer, the better! :) Great job, just next time, don't write such a sad ending. Now I'm gonna go through the whole day being extremely depressed. |
Reviewed By: TrunksChick19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fan Fic is by far the greatest story of B/V I have ever read. Your writing style is fantastic!!! Please continue writing...I look forward to the next chapters in Feeding Genius. I am an aspiring writer and I hope at one point or another I will have the amount of talent that you convey in your stories...please keep writing
Best wishes,
Kyoki-sama ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phenomenal !!! One of the best fanfics I've ever read. This is awsome good work. My heartfelt thanks goes out to you for all the joy reading this has brought to me !
Regards
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATULATIONS!!! I ain't got words to make comments! Terrrrrriiiiifffiiiccc!!! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 17:41 CST
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^_^ Great fic, I loved it and your style of writing. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: January 31, 2003 13:00 CST
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I'm sad it's over too, but I think it was a fantastic ending! I'm glad you didn't turn Vegeta into a total mushpot too. It's hard not to in a romance story, but you managed to show how he cares without stripping him of the Vegeta pride and attitude we all know 'n love! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Blue_Saiyan_Angel On: January 30, 2003 12:43 CST
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Tears running down face, that was awesome. I really enjoy reading your work. Good luck on your next one.
I Can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: January 30, 2003 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! One of my fave V/B fics of all time has finally come to a close :(. This was simply beautiful and it amazes me how you took 2 anime characters and brought them to life so convincingly. For well over a year you took me on a roller coaster ride of emotions, not knowing from one chap to the next how things were going to work out for our love birds. Fantastic effort Ember. I hope you're proud of this wonderful story. Bravo girl!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: January 31, 2003 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...it's over...a wonderful way to end it though...i followed you on fanfiction.net, and i loved it...i thought that you actually portrayed them in quite a...well...you kept them in character for like the enitre time...i love the fic...and i think that it's one of my favorites! keep up the great work! *.~ |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ember-chan, I absolutely understand your sentiment now that this fic is finished. It's been such an integral part of your life for so long. However, you have other plans, and I can't wait to see what your brilliant imagination produces next!
It's been a joy to follow Bulma and Vegeta through this adventure. You captured Toriyama-san's personality traits for them beautifully. I loved Kandai, too. He totally fit into the scheme of things.
Congratulations on another successful fanfic, and here's to the next in a line of many!
Meliza |
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