| "Learning New Things" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: daisygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really great job. I didn't know if I would get into liking it as kinky as it started, but an excelent job portraying their emotions and angst for each other. Good job on the fight scene and the make up after it. The fact that Goku thought the two of them were attacked and Chichi was ready to attack Trunks was ironically funny. Good job! ~daisy
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a really good fic. I usually don't read Gohan Yaoi fics but I'm glad I read this one. Nice job.
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was sooooo good. Finally someone who writes with the right amount of smut and fluff to satisfy! I found myself going up and down with both Gohan's and Trunks' emotions, your very talented. Good Job!Keep Writing Y^^Y
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was a very beautiful fic. I feel kind of sorry for Videl, but even in the GT series I see Gohan not that happy wiht her.I always had in mind that Gohan and Mirai Trunks shuld be together. My praise to your work! God bless it!
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