Reviewed By: Saphi On: August 29, 2007 01:15 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I would really like to know whats gonna happen next...its got my intrest up and I can't wait to read more of your story...please up date SOON...
Reviewed By:Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 13:40 CDT Comment/Review: well, on chapter 2 you spent to much time writing about what you already said. And make the chapters longer please. Good work so far.