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Reviewed By: Z On: March 02, 2005 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! i love this story please update soon ill definetly read it!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww so cute! i've read stories like this in the past but the plot never seem to bore me. i love it. hope you write more =) OoOoOoO swimsuits. but i kinda think inuyasha and kags hooked together quickly.. i mean kissing eachother quickly and yeah BUT STILL I LOVE IT! =)
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Reviewed By: kaiku7194 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think u should go on!!! add more chapters!!!! it's great!!! email me pls its: azn_babe56@hotmail.com thnx!!!!
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Reviewed By: someperson123 On: March 01, 2005 18:36 CST
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kagome and inuyasha wont get together that fast right? i dont wanna see kagome get hurt yet...
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Reviewed By: huHu_huggiez On: March 01, 2005 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow inuyasha your a playa!! i think you should get kikyou in this story. make kagome all jealous!! Woow that would be cool
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Title: Nice job updata soon
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story you really made the characters kool and not tollay different from the show. Miroku the same Sess. is alittle different nicer in a way you have not written a lot about him that's kool i like Inuyasha and Kagome together better anyway's. The style of your writting is different but it also needs inprovements but at least you know them that is good but you should try to fix that. You also make Inuyasha very very hot i like that please updata soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that's great someone slaping Kouga! lmao well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon please? and you might wanna fix chappy 2 it's kinda hard to read all smushed all up together! well update again soon pleasE?
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Title: hey whats this box for?
Reviewed By: looloo12356 On: February 09, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, it was very origanal. please write more and the the reason i rated your spelling and grammar a 9 is because i noticed a few mistakes. plus you probaly dont know this but i NEVER review any fics i read so since this one was so good i decided to give it a try and tell you what i think. looloo
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i like your style of writing, but your spelling, grammar and sentence structure need some work...all in all, im enjoying it! keep it up!
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and i cant wait untill u write the next chapters. ashley/devils chlid
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 19:36 CST
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i liked it & i hope you continue but i saw a lot of grammar & spelling mistakes. other than that it was great.
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Title: ahahahaha
Reviewed By: Gouka85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story alot i thought is was good,the spelling was a little off,but besides that it was good.KEEP WRITING I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start but seriously, you need a Beta reader, i agree with Shinobi-chan here, you have a lot grammar and spelling errors, not to mentio names aren't capitalized and you mispelled them at times, like Kouga was spelled Kogua... though the story itself is not the most original one of them all, it has potential: Keep writing but consider getting a beta reader first, this is not a flame but a friendly advise, your story has a lot of potential so if you can just fix your grammar errors your all set, good luck.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 13:04 CST
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Good story idea, but you might want to get a beta reader. Alot of the words and names aren't capitalized as well grammer mistakes.
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writting.
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