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Reviewed By: kaya_taisho On: June 17, 2005 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that your story waz written sortof in the way some people talk on msn, with all the shortened versions, and different spellings of words, and while that makes it quicker and easier to read, it doesn't make it feel like a story i waz just wondering if yasha's gonna have gome as a gf, then cheat, then get bac 2gether. Just wondering!!! anywho, luv the stori, your dedicated reader, kaya_taisho
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Reviewed By: Love It!!!!!!!!!!! On: June 16, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your fic sooooooo much. Please update soon i've been like checking everyday to see if you've added a fith chap. Its like absolutely fantastic!
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG i loved the new chapter. pleaz update soon i really want to know what happens to them. and i love the u write. devils child
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: May 17, 2005 14:21 CDT
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So sweet and adorable. Great job on this fic so far, can't wait to see the next update!
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Title: My Opinion
Reviewed By: Mekanna On: May 11, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story alot, but it's got a cliche plot, no offense. It has its good points though. If you want to expand your vocabulary and add more variety to your story, you should look at a thesaurus, they have several online. If you would like to email me and tell me how you feel about my review, you may contact me at xkilledxangelx@hotmail.com; Always check your work even if you use spell check, sometimes it chooses the wrong word and counts it wrong. Don't be insulted by my critique either. It's a good story, but like all story's it could use a little work. I can't wait to see what you come up with.
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 18:23 CDT
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omg....I love this fic....I cannot wait for the next chapter....you are doing great on this fic...I just love it..keep up the good work..just to let you know..I added you as one of my fav. authors..k,well..update update update...:)I'm soo happy..
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: May 09, 2005 15:42 CDT
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pleeeeeeeeeeeease update!!! *sobs*
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Reviewed By: MasterFluffyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 19:06 CDT
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PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY! lol -jumps up and down wildly then sits back down- You know aht this story needs? KAGOME NEEDS TO SIT INUYASHA! MUAHAHAHA-cough cough-HAHAHA! lol sorry, I like to see him get sat! Evil? VERY! He is the cutest little inu hanyou and everything but he needs sat for being a bad boy! (If it was me, I would punish him for being bad -says 'You've been a bad boy, go to my room!'- MUAHAHAHA-cough cough-HAHAHA! lol~Cassie
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! It's a good story, really. I hope you won't get any writers block again! Continue, continue please!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: May 04, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story it really got me interested in it. Please Update. I LOVE IT!!!!! P.S.Love ya!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 04, 2005 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that the end?It said at the top where the story info was that the status was completed! PLEASE don't make that the last chappy! It was JUST heating up! Please continue the story or I might cry!!! PLEASE! I'm BEGGING you!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterFluffyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 14:41 CDT
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This is a really good fic! Right now I'm on 'Pool Party'. I haven't finished it yet, but please know that I will! Please right more, and if it isn't a trouble, right a long chapter. Short ones are fine if they will get you to update sooner, but I really like long chapters lol. Please continue writing! lol bye! ~Cassie
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Title: chapter
Reviewed By: Yana5 On: May 04, 2005 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chappy. i loved it
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Reviewed By: luv ya On: May 02, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: flying pigs On: April 29, 2005 14:18 CDT
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Font Color CUTE! UPDATE!!!
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