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Title: hey whats this box for?
Reviewed By: looloo12356 On: February 09, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, it was very origanal. please write more and the the reason i rated your spelling and grammar a 9 is because i noticed a few mistakes. plus you probaly dont know this but i NEVER review any fics i read so since this one was so good i decided to give it a try and tell you what i think. looloo
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like your style of writing, but your spelling, grammar and sentence structure need some work...all in all, im enjoying it! keep it up!
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and i cant wait untill u write the next chapters. ashley/devils chlid
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 19:36 CST
Comment/Review:
i liked it & i hope you continue but i saw a lot of grammar & spelling mistakes. other than that it was great.
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Title: ahahahaha
Reviewed By: Gouka85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story alot i thought is was good,the spelling was a little off,but besides that it was good.KEEP WRITING I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start but seriously, you need a Beta reader, i agree with Shinobi-chan here, you have a lot grammar and spelling errors, not to mentio names aren't capitalized and you mispelled them at times, like Kouga was spelled Kogua... though the story itself is not the most original one of them all, it has potential: Keep writing but consider getting a beta reader first, this is not a flame but a friendly advise, your story has a lot of potential so if you can just fix your grammar errors your all set, good luck.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 13:04 CST
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Good story idea, but you might want to get a beta reader. Alot of the words and names aren't capitalized as well grammer mistakes.
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writting.
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