"Machina" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dark ki not login in On: March 14, 2006 16:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: cool. where the andriods around where cooler was there? the movie timelines are messed up completely. anyway. love your start of it.
| Title: oi Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 06:59 CDT Comment/Review: I like it, but Vegeta is very OOC.. :) But it's a great story, keep it up. byebye
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