| "The Secrets of Salvation" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. I love the little twist with Kouga and Naraku. You have a great idea here and the story is developing nicely. Miroku always knows when something is up, so I hope they can figure it out! Great so far, thanks for sharing it with us!
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Title: awwww...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww.... that was so kool how Naraku saw his own death! and how InuYasha and Kouga were going at it well keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: lemonluver On: February 14, 2005 11:38 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really interesting. I'm enjoying it a lot. I feel so sorry for Inu, because he doesn't know what Koga has done to Kag. Wait till she finds out that Koga put a spell on her and plotted with Naraku. The shits going to hit the fan then, ne. I'm really curious to see how far you're going to take Koga's spell on Kag before the group figures out something is wrong. I'd love to see a lemon with Koga/Kag and then afterwards she finds out about the spell and she then has to try and win Inu back. Ah shit I rambling again, sorry. I'm just really enjoying this so please continue.
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Title: O.O WOW
Reviewed By: lab99 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY LOVE IT!! Amazing job!! PLease update SOOOOOOOOOOOOON! OH and try to space a bit more so it's easier to read! ^__~ But I still love it!~Laura
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE STORY PLZ UPDATE IT SOON!!!
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