| "Koga of the Wolves Meets Another" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: just a review...
Reviewed By: problemchild (of animespiral) On: March 28, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good but you need to make the chapters longer...theres really no point in reading something thats only 500 words (or less). That is unless it's a half chapter.....
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
oh cool story. when r u going to update it? oh i was wondering could i join? if not that's fine with me
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Reviewed By: Casy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could see her on the hill bleeding with a wolf at her side. It's a very good beginning. LYLAS! -Casy
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