| "One Step Forward, Two Steps Back" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah an update! i was really excited when i found out that this fic had been updated. thanks. ^__^ it's a really good story.
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Title: Thoughts shouldn't be allowed to scamper...
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:16 CDT
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Heero's kinda OOC, but I really don't care for once, you've done it damn well. Heh, I just thought, why is it 95% (or thereabouts ^_^;;) of fics similar to this in AU terms have Quatre as a really good basketball player? He never so much as holds a basketball in the series, so I just wondered whether everyone just thinks of it as a really good idea, whether I've just missed something, or what. I don't suppose anyone has any answers, do they...? *coughs* Anyway, back to reviewing this fab fic... Thanks for updating!! I bet Heero's phoned Relena, did he? Did he? Did he? *nags whilst thoughts scamper round in excited circles in brain* Was Duo so upset because of his upbringing on the streets and he just got a huge shock when Heero pretended to drown him? Or something like that? *Thoughts start scampering faster* Ohhhh, I don't know... Please, please update soon so I can find out and satisfy my curiousity! ~Sandy~
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 21:57 CDT
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Oooo, devious plotting. What does Duo have in store for Heero? And why is he making things so confusing? He likes Heero, Heero likes him....what is his problem?! Update soon!
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Title: ooh
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 11:49 CDT
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Devious plotting! ^__^ Can't wait!! Please keep updating, you're on my favourites list... But no pressure. You got that? No pressure, none at all, just KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Takes deep breath* Ok, sorry if I scared you. I'm not insane, really! I just love this fic. I like the way you write Heero; it's way OOC, but very funny and cute. ^^ For the millionth time, please update soon!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sandy (Sandileina) On: July 10, 2005 12:27 CDT
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This is fantastic!! Seriously, you HAVE to write more of this fic! I'm adding you to my favourites, so please, please update soon! I like how you write Quatre, it's very good indeed.
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Title: aww how sad
Reviewed By: shi-tenshi On: May 31, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y'know i was a little cautious about reading this latest chapter because when i first read this story i was sad after your last chapter becuse of what duo said to heero about the tin man helping himself but when i read this latest chapter i was glad i did because it much better than the last. anyway great chapter and story. i hope you update soon. ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^0^ *opera singy song voice* IIIII LUUUUUUUUUUV IIIIIIITTTTTTT
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 01:15 CST
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The way you are writting is just fine, continue the good work!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: February 13, 2005 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
totally absolutly love it! i really hope ull update soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: RLD On: February 06, 2005 17:53 CST
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Wow really cool so far. I like how you made it realistic. Update Soon!!
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Title: Ooh!
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting indeed! I spent about ten minutes trying to imagine Heero following in his mother's footsteps and becoming an actress... It was very entertaining, but also very weird... Well, I hope you keep writing this! It is really good so far. DUO FOREVER!!!!!!!! Oh and by the way, if you ever want any help with Japanese words/phrases and stuff, I'm from Japan and I'd be delighted to help you! ^_^ My email addy is FudgyIllusen@hotmail.com. Please write the next chapter soon! ~Sandileina~
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 11:11 CST
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Sounds like a really good story, I hope to read more of it soon! And how their relationship will start and all that jazz. Take care and happy writing!
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