| "From A Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Psycho Pyromaniac
Reviewed By: Sadistic_Child On: June 22, 2005 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... -censored-.... god!!! ~crying~ POOR YUGI-KUN!!! your a great writer btw. Also: there is a story called 'From a Hikari', but it's nothing like yours... ^_^;; (( if this is posted twice, blaim the computer ))
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:37 CDT
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^-^ My grammer and spelling are worse than a two year-olds (just read my stories) So I can't help But you've been doing a great job. Keep it up and YOU ROCK OUT P.S. I agree with most of these people I've never read something like this before. If you need flamers taken care of tell me *cracks knuckles* I'll help ^_^
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Reviewed By: RicanRocker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O You...are good. I started reading the first chapter, and I just couldn't take my eyes off the screen. Your story is friggin' addicting! I LOVE IT! Update soon, please? *goes to add story to favorites* I will be back to review!!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (not logged in) On: March 31, 2005 11:31 CST
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I understand about the whole writer's block and school thing, but PLEASE try to update! Please!
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Reviewed By: Almasy On: March 28, 2005 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sigh* Ain't flamers silly people? I would use that flame to roast marshmellows hunny cos I think that this story is great! Your grammar and spelling is fine and I've never read a fic like this one...EVER! Tis great and original and please carry it on! Keep writing! Almasy xxx Ps Can I have a marshmellow? They taste nice! PPS If you were still interested in a Beta I'll try to help if ya want!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin who isn't logged on On: March 28, 2005 12:57 CST
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I was once told there are only a limited amount of story plots available in the world and all of them have been taken by Walt Disney. Most fanfics I've read resemble another one. It just can't be helped. There are only so many characters, so many plots and so many plot twists that can be written about. It's the author's creativity, what they bring to the story, that makes a plot great or makes it sink. My suggestion is that if you get another flame, ignore it. They want you to rant at them. They want the attention and the more attention you give, even negative, the happier they are. Just delete the thing, report it, and move on. Hopefully, one day, the flamers will get tired of being ignored and go away. BTW- between one dyslexic to another, your doing good.
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (not logged in) On: March 28, 2005 07:44 CST
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I can't believe the nerve of that guy/girl that posted that you copied his/her idea! I have never read a fic with this same idea and plot. You're doing a great job, and please, continue!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your spelling and grammar are just fine. You write much better than a lot of other fics I have read. I have never seen another story like this and I think it is very original. I agree with your assessment of people who flame and don't use a name.
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Reviewed By: Yayatso [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 11:53 CST
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Okay dookie, creepy but please continue i hope Yugi and Yami see eachother again!
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Reviewed By: can't believe you posted this On: March 25, 2005 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, reading this story has made me realize that someday I will be a millionare. If people love a poorly written ripoff like this one then my well written orignal story will make me bigger than any other author that's ever lived.
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Title: draqgonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:23 CST
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:'( man This is incredible I love this story I can feel how Yugi's feeling nd I just want to cry :') This is a beautiful story. Please keep updating ^_^ Thanks and have fun
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I could soooo feel what Yugi was feeling! You described that so well! And that scene where the bitch Anzu and her thong? It just made me hate her more. Update ASAP!
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read a story like the one you proposed once, but I don't think the author really covered the bases well. She sort of skated over the whole "Yami dumped me for Anzu" bit and went directly for "Anzu is a cold b!tch how could I have been so..." I love the concept, though, I am curious to see what direction you would take it in. I'd make Yami thrash around a bit. I wouldn't give him an easy "That's alright. Now that I'm dead I've decided that every nasty, hurtful thing you did is forgiven." I think I'd make him suffer and make Yugi angrier. Maybe Yami can come to the slow realization that he really screwed up and he's really blown it. Just a few ideas that I tossed around after reading your fic. I'm interested in finding out what you come up with. Update PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: ku On: February 05, 2005 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..please continue...once i started reading this i couldn't stop, it made me feel like i was feeling everything yugi was feeling...it was so cool...please update VERY soon!
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