| "The Trap of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: evean On: April 28, 2005 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To come across such a wonderful story... I've read many vampire tales and they're usually awful. Yours is beyond any words. Write more and soon, please!!!
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Reviewed By: Ellie On: April 07, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa. What is he THINKING? Aoshi's going to piss Misao off with all his high-handed ways... Wonderfully sexy as Aoshi is, maybe Misao should go for Soujiro?? Also, great new chapter!! XD Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Title: holy...shit
Reviewed By: anime fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update, just a little confusing when you jump back and forth from situations, you dont name any names, and for a paragraph or so i'm confused. but anyways... GREAT story, great chappie...UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE!?
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Title: Glad you updated!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 19:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I read this chappie on ff.net. I can't believe the nerve of him! Aoshi can be so self centered some times.
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Title: BEST EVER
Reviewed By: anime fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 00:42 CST
Comment/Review:
k. i'm in love with your story. please finish it. i really wish you would work on this more. please?!
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Title: AWESOME!! Plase update it frequently
Reviewed By: PCH On: February 28, 2005 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it. It's so sexy and, well, creatve. You make me wanna read it more and more. Keep up good work.
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Reviewed By: Silver Miko On: February 06, 2005 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ink, you know I love your work. Damn the man (ff)!
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