| "Bonds of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Tracybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2011 18:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You spelled a lot of names wrong...like Kakarot and Saiyan for example. All in all I loved the story. It was original. a little...well actually a lot ooc but ok. |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 08:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, like the way you portrayed the characters, love vegeta, oooh yeah
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Reviewed By: xiaoyu_mitsurugi On: July 28, 2005 02:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I loved the story! Good job!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very Original out look on Vegeta's emotions. I like it. I especially love the thought of a pregnant Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: silver wolf (can't log in) On: September 13, 2004 07:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really GOOD! I can easily classify that as one if not the most original B/V fics I have ever read, now I'm onto the sequile!
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Reviewed By: 6516 On: July 07, 2004 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful fic, keeping all events and characters as they should be. I * strongly * encourage you to continue writing.
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 06:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome i loved it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!! O_O
YOu're alive!!!
YOU SAID YOU'D WRITE A SEQUEL SUCH A LONG TIME AGO!! THERE WERE ONLY TWO CHAPTERS FOUND!! WHERE IS THE REST??? WHERE!! WHERE?? WHEEEERREEE??? O_O
btw, great chapter, I read it quite a few times about a year ago or something..... |
Reviewed By: Jodie On: March 02, 2002 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really LOVED it i almost cried on the sad part it was so sad, and i just wanna to tell that it was really great and hopefully there would be a next part just for fun but it was really greati like the part when Bulma hit Yamacha in the mall that was really funny and i couldn't stop laughing at all well anyways it was great and all your work it geat too ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 23:25 EST
Comment/Review:
haha fake pheromes! i read this story already on another website, but i didn't hesitate to read it again! it's severely entertaining! :)
your sequel was just as good! |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: October 30, 2001 22:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Great story! I loved it! Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: hey hey On: November 02, 2001 02:41 EST
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wel that was good but bulma does NOT have ki and never will but none the less it was a kick ass chapter and im going to read the rest. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 02, 2001 04:46 EST
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WOW that was a great story and i loved it PLEASE write more you did the charictors so so so well it was fantastic ok thankz for lisning to me blab bye |
Reviewed By: Janelle Grant On: November 21, 2001 12:55 EST
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What can I say? I'm a sucker for any V/B fic there is (all those that are good). All I can say is...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!! I an't wait for the sequel!!! |
