| "Field Training" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't Like the new Souske... But that doesn't mean i don't Like your work. it's good... very good actuaLLy...
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Title: Densest Soldier
Reviewed By: Terdwilicker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. Seeing Sousuke's awkward military approach to women was hilarious.
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Title: wonderful & steamy
Reviewed By: TigerEye On: August 04, 2006 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story. For a 'X' rated piece it is quite long, but you manage to fit in the romantic/adult elements into it very well while still being true to the anime and characters. Very nicely done!
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Reviewed By: Kyle Muntz On: July 13, 2006 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I like the way you divided it up into four long chapters so that each one felt like it's own episode. It felt like I was reading the show, and that's a good feel. On the other hand, I wish you would have left spaces between the paragraphs and given a little more detail in your writing. It didn't bug me very much though, and I still enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Sky Marshal Oz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I really like how you integrated your story with the actual events from the series.
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Reviewed By: jhj0176 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I love how Sosuke is getting a chance to be a with all the girls. Can't wait to see who he gets or what happens next. I hope to see and update soon.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Teehee! You're turning Sosuke into a gigolo! I like it! This story is interesting... and fun! Waiting for the next chapter! ~pagan_sedjou
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