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| "Heaven meets hell: Behind the scenes." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Little_Tennyo
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 03:40 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I feel sop ashamed and dumb. After I put this story in my fav. List I looked at other stories you made … only to find out that your other story (Heaven Meets hell) is connected to this story. I just though the "behind the sences" part in the title in this story was just for show or something. I feel so embarrassed and dumb. So sorry. *hides in a corner* I so ashamed.
| Title: UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Always to lazy to login) On: March 26, 2005 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU *points to author* YOU must UPDATE SOON! I love this fanfic so much! It's sometimes a bit hard to understand in some sentence (those I have to read a couple of times) but that could also be 'cause English isn't my first language and I don't understand everything all the time, so don't feel insulted haha. Omg I like this fanfic so so SO much! A bit more Kagome/ Inu Yasha please would be nice *shows big watery puppy eyes* of course Miroku/ Sango is my fav. So I'm really happy you made a fanfic mainly 'bout them. You really write long chapters and I'm loving it! (I'm loving a lot of thing don't I if you read this review over and count the times I say love … just ignore that girl ^^) You put everything down very nicely in your fanfic, like Sango feelings and stuff. Poor Sango felt dumped my Miroku's running off. And poor Miroku who was only shocked. And I hope Kagome gets her way if she wants a child (I'm no fan of little children so I won't let myself out on this one haha) like I said before: sometimes it's a bit confusing though but then again it could be my fault for reading it wrong. Anyway you're defiantly going in my fav. List 'cause I wanna know how this goes further, so update soon or else I'll come over and force ya behind your computer *grabs rope* and don't think I wont. Anyway I think I'm scaring the crap out you by now so I'll quit this review. Don't mind my grammar in this review (my spell check sucks on my computer) Again: UPDATE SOON! Bubai, K!$$ and Lov | Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, so do we get to see a behind the scenes with sesshy and rin? i'd like to read a chapter on them. anywho, great chappie, keep them coming. lol. can't wait to read a chappie on rin and sesshy, please update soon.
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