"The Road from Berlin" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 10, 2005 02:56 CDT Comment/Review: Oh, right, "final journey"--Albert died and was brought back as a cyborg, i forgot... *smacks forehead* I still think you should add more, though.
| Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 10, 2005 02:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like what you have so far, but your story would be better if you added more to it.
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