Reviewed By: ILoveSendohAkira On: August 17, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, I love the two of them together... too bad Sendoh has to be the uke.... Anyways, here's something I took straight out from your fic: "Sendoh said while burying his face in Maki's chest. Maki chuckled and dropped his briefcase, arms wrapping around Sendoh, and whispered in Sendoh's hair, "I've missed you too, Akira. I kept thinking about you during the conference." Maki tilted Sendoh's chin upwards and claimed his lips in a soft, sweet kiss." Lol... this is not a flame, but... isn't Sendoh 5cm taller than Maki? Then.... I just can't picture Sendoh placing his head on Maki's chest if he's taller....
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