| "It starts" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: HELLLLLLLLO?
Reviewed By: I Love IY [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhy? Why did you stop writing this story? Well, I guess I can't really say anything since I stopped writing on one of mine too but I'm trying. Anyways, keep on it and start writing again.
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Title: It starts
Reviewed By: CheyTown On: May 17, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASSSSSEEEEEEEE write more. Ti's Really Good. Great Job so Far. Update SOOOooooooooon
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Title: I dont know why Im writing this as a title. ^_^
Reviewed By: Oukami On: March 26, 2005 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot that your psycho mom doesn't let you watch Inuyasha...*throws a pity party for Alisha* ^_^ I wanted to ask, how's life w/ your dad? It must be great getting away from psycho-mom, eh? Anyway, have fun with your dadums. BYE!
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Reviewed By: Oukami On: March 26, 2005 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI ALISHA! THIS IS MELISSA! Sorry about the caps...I'm, uh, hyper? I bet you cant imagine me being hyper. ESPECIALLY not as hyper as Elise or Sarah... But Elise isn't all that hyper, she's just kind of insane...no, no I guess she is hyper. ANYWAY! I really like your fic. It reminds me of that other one, remember that 1? It was kinda freaky, but it was really well written! I still cant imagine Kagome becoming an Inu Yukai. I think I spelt Yukai right... if not, oh well! I think I'm just rambling now. BYE! OH, HAPPY EASTER!
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Title: Huzzah!
Reviewed By: InvincibleInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, but you might need to set up a solid plotline. Also, HOW DARE YOU KILL KOUGA!? I mean, I love Inu Yasha more, but Kouga is still awesome enough for me to care if he dies. Oh well, he dies in many fics i've read. lol. keep up the good work and write more! Also, if you have the time, read my fics!
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Title: HA! HA! HA!
Reviewed By: Sesshy-lover. On: February 27, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! Hi Sesshy lil slut Chapter 6 was very interesting.>_
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Reviewed By: OBSD (or michelle) On: February 25, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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hi alisha! its a good story but WHY THE LAND OF BARNEY?!?*twich* lol anyway its a good story
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Title: confused
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:18 CST
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did Kagome die? i hope not. please hurry with the next chp. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: jodi On: February 21, 2005 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooo good so please keep wrighting
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good but what did all those symbles at the end of the chapter mean o.0
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and i hope that u can update it soon.
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: Sesshy-lover On: February 14, 2005 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This is Justine Great Fanfic!!!^_^
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Title: Ch 8
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:35 CST
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Crapx10! How could you do that to Kags!!? That kitsaine is sooo dead! Not by just InuYasha but Sango and Miroku as well! Speaking of InuYasha...glad he got Kouga. Now get that Kit!! Poor Kags...Oh yeah, off topic. I didn't know you could Post in Color here, (I knew you could with reviews but not in actual stories! Cool trix!) Till next update chicka.
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:27 CST
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You bet I likes! Why else whould I keep reviewing?? Well you answered part of my last question on Kags. But Geez...when will she get away from all these lustfull Youkai?? *heavy sigh* Well at least with InuYasha she may get over it eventually. Just regret thier first joining in this circumstance...hopefully. *shudders* Eww. Rape is never a good thing to think on...*shudders again*.
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Title: Ch 6
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:20 CST
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Kouga just had to be a total Ass didn't he? He really should have claimed her properly before rubbing it in Inu-chan's face like that...He's such a Dimwit...*shrugs* Better for InuYasha for sure! When are you going to get Kags out of her current nightmare anyway?? Oh speaking of which, on your personal issue there...'Beauty is in the Eyes of the Beholder'. Yeah I know, it sucks...but Clique's are said for a reason over and over. lol! Everyone is 'some one's' ideal. Kind of scary when one really thinks on it too much. So I won't. Ja ne!
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Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:12 CST
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*blinks twice* O-kaaaay...now that's an odd thing. Especially since MM is not allowing such things to happen here like that chapter. *grins* (gives high-five) Kudo's for getting away with it! lol. As for flames...well that's the only downer about posting. It's a risk, but you may get your better reviews sooner than later. Cya.
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:07 CST
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*frowns* Ok, back up there abit...What types of Youkai's were they??? One was fox, that I get. But the other two?? Was one Neko/cat? The other, no clue. Oh for further info...Fox females are called 'Vixon's'. 'Bitch' is for Dogs/Wolves. But this is the Inu-verse, so that's understandable. *grins* Hope Kouga kills the jerk.
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 23:57 CST
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Sesshoumauru is such a Freaking Jerk!! (sorry can't really use words I'd like to say...this IS a review after all! lol.) I'm sure you get what I'm probably really calling him anyway... As for your comment about the next chapter, wouldn't at all be surprised. *smiles* I'm joking. But that is quiet the cliffy. ja ne!
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Title: Ch 2
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 23:51 CST
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*blinks* Ok, story-wise, it's shaping up fairly well. He, (Sess-sama) is not going to keep her for himself but to use her as a Bargining chip?? *blinks again in disbelief* Nice twist!! As for your 'life story'...does you Mom know of your posting stories on the Net?? *shudders to think on it further* As for the younger sib thing...Yeah I understand that perfectly well. *frowns* If she were to access this and read all reviews and see all the names online she'd have a Spaz to beat the band! lol She won't have to worry on me...I'm female. With a big furry live footwarmer as I type this...Hence my sign in name. She's 1/4 wolf. So 'wolfshadow'. *shrugs* Well don't let family take you down to bad. Life is ment to overcome all types of obstacles...just like InuYasha did before meeting Kag and co.
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 23:34 CST
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Well for your first attempt at a fanfic I can't fault your choice of pairings! *grins* I'm a die-hard Kag-Inu fan! (DIE Kikyou!!*grumbles under breath* evil demented thing...) Oh as for your comment on Toto-sai-ji-jii...BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That is too funny for words! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapters r short but it a great story please update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos On: February 06, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey your story is pretty good, that coming from another Hentai, hehe. I think that you should continue your story.Kouga should get some alone time with Kagome *wink wink* And then Inuyasha should come rescue her, only to find that she's been had. Then Starts teh Kagome Pity party..."Oh Inuyasha will never want me now ...boohoo!" And then Inuyasha makes the situation worse by not knowing how to handle it, but in the end their love shines true and then Kagome and Inu get to have some alone time...for 'Healing Broken Hearts' hehe...well any who that was just a sugestion! And I'm sorry your moms so evil. Have you ever tried downloading episodes of Inuyasha off of WinMX?
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