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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter! A very believeable set of characters, and I loved the touch of comfort offered by Hiei in the opportunity to go kill somethings.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
eek, well, unless this was the last chapter, update again soon please. that was a good eek too. ~~Kuramas Gurl
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All this is happening at the same time. wow. You called Hiei the baka, well, whatever. This is good I haven't read something like this, different pov's for the same event. very good. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nanner7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH!!!!!! You are a wonderful writter. I just love how you have written a chapter where Kurama and Keiko have there own POV's for the same event....Talk about creative. this is the first time i have ever read something like this....I really loved it. Such angst and despair...You made me cry when Kurama started to cry.... so anywho i just wanted to say good job and please update really soon. ^__^
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