| "Lemon Rebellion" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: mayb i can continue
Reviewed By: ho-iatneh On: August 06, 2005 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i try to continue this story...i got a few ideas i want to throw out...of my perverted mind...if u dont mind a few strange sex settings...if u say yes then contact me at iatnehofgnik@yahoo.com
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Title: funny!
Reviewed By: Ukyo-chan On: August 05, 2005 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
first of all...hahahahahahaha!!!!you guys are so funny. luv your authors-and characters-argument touch. good story.~Ja.
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Reviewed By: iatnehfoimak On: July 12, 2005 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad...but its sad that it ended but if there is anything else i might be able to help but then again i can't so anyways good luck...
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Title: Geez Tal...
Reviewed By: Taro MD On: February 09, 2005 17:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I know that man but still...
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Title: Taro...
Reviewed By: Andrew J. Talon On: February 09, 2005 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously man, he wasn't criticizing you to be mean. Take his compliment and think on it.
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: February 09, 2005 02:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Look I may have a problem with my dialouge but it doesn't stop me from having fun. It'll get better in the next chapters I can be certain of that most certain. Sides if you don't like it, don't read it
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Reviewed By: Name/Nick: On: February 08, 2005 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ten out of ten for cute, minus seven for grammar and prose, plus two for the Purple People Eater reference. You need a good pre-reader; your prose and dialogue, especially in the first chapter, are really stilted and unnatural, so much so that it's really distracting.
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Amusing. :)
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