| "Beautiful Disaster" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: tallrunner On: March 24, 2010 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing! I've read so many one-shots that are set in a blizzard, I saw yours and just thought "boring... *yawn*" but then I read it all the way through and it was one of the best I've ever read. And it wasn't just sex, which I thought was great. Too many like that too. SO WELL DONE!!!!!!! And by the way, great choice on song, I love "Beautiful Disaster" and Kelly Clarckson :)
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 10:06 CST
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This was an intriguing way of solving the all-known "three-is-a-crowd"- matter. Kikyou as the unselfish part, forcing the other two to happiness? I like it. I like it a lot, and it makes a lot more sense than the other way around. And oh the sweet sex... I most of all really think you've nailed Inuyashas way of thinking. I am grateful for this fiction.
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 17:00 CDT
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ahh, very good. very interesting. all that sexual tension was building and building and building! and then BAM! with one word, i loved how the word was no by the way, it just explodes! ah, it was a very good, although a little winded read. i enjoyed this thoroughly!
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Title: Beautiful Disaster
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 On: March 07, 2005 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Claps and praises writer greatly* Awesome! Im a major Inu/Kag fan and that was one of the BEST! Yes,I mean beast one-shots ive ever read others are ones from scherezade and a few more but i tell you I am a picky reader sometimes especially when it comes to one-shots but I praise and honor you greatly! Please keep writing more one-shots about Inu/Kag cause I loved this one and it will earn its own spot on my favorites list forever!Your one of the best writers Ive ever seen and dont you ever stop writing! -Kagome0820
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 13:32 CST
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Holy SHEET!!That has got to be one of the best one-shots that I have EVER seen written (besides my own , of course :P) Anywho, You just got yourself added to my fav author list and I'm on my way to reading your other stuff. God, I hope you keep writing!!
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Title: Dam, that's a good story.
Reviewed By: The Wolf Of Endless Winter On: February 18, 2005 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got some Real talent there. I hope you try writing a long fic. If you want an example, read The Lucky Ones,Purity, and Transformations. You have to potential to be as great or greater than them. I hope you use your talent well. Goodbye, Dolarodus
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Title: *claps*
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (to lazy to login) On: February 15, 2005 00:58 CST
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Very good one-shot! *trows confettie in the air* this was so good! amazingly long and nicly detailed, not to much, just enough to keep it fun and not make me skip sentence :P i hope you write many more (*caugh* Miroku & *cough* sango *cough*)'cause this one was just GREAT! ^_^ K!$$ and Love ~ Tennyo
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Reviewed By: ShagsChain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 03:25 CST
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gorgeous. great build up tension between the two, that's not just purely sexual based but real issues they have to deal with. interesting twist, as you say
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(Not loged in) On: February 07, 2005 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! I don't know what else to say about it because I'm at a loss for words. I really really love this one. and I'm off to look at more of your fics! and I'll be sure to take a look at the pic that you did for this k? keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 23:11 CST
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Hmm...is my name that hard to spell? ::adopts thoughtful expression:: You should see the *real* version...has too many h's in it and is very, very long. Figured, nobody would ever get it right! On to your fic - very, very yummy! There was a bit of sweetness and certainly a great deal of spice in the mix! I really liked how you gave the two some rather important and heavy inner thoughts... It made the piece seem like much more than just a mere hentai-fest/blanket scenario. I also loved how Inuyasha was on the verge of transformation...y'know I love demon Yasha! Nice touch, having Kikyo be the one who "engineered" the whole thing. Poor resurrected miko gets such a bad rap and she's really a character who deserves some sympathy. I'm glad you didn't make her seem like a spiteful witch who's out to get Inu for herself. As for the auras...hehe...y'know I love the idea of energies and auras uniting during a mating. :)
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