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| "My Immortal" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: crap
Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
...now Im crying... I had to listen to the song as I read it, so it made it more dramatic. and now im crying
| Reviewed By: Kari Yamata On: June 24, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your fanfic is so moving... you almost had me in tears, especially since I love that song! What a beautiful ending, though I would've like to have known how Sango and Miroku died. Your spelling could be improved as often there were words misspelled. The description was beautiful; I felt as though it was an image straight into Kagome's heart. Excellent job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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