| "Little Meilin" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 22:49 CDT
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this is a good although confusing story, especially when i read old & new first because it says's it's the prequel. one of the items that gets confusing between the two stories is that in old & new inuyasha knows kagome is pregnant and cuts her stomach open, while in little meilin he doenst know she's pregnant and just pushes her down the well. also in old & new you have kagome being yukuke's cousin who starts going to his school and they arent related in little meilin. in little meilin there are a few confusing things as well like the fact that naraku was killed 500 years ago in the past and suddenly pops living in a palace with others who died (kagura, kanna, kohaku) just 2 days travel from sesshomaru's palace and 1 day from kouga's den but they didnt know he was still alive. also naraku, sesshomaru, kouga, ect live in the makai and you say there's a village of humans who claim that kagome was attacking them, however humans dont live in the makai. also why in the world didnt kagome purify naraku as soon as meilin was safely away? in fact she could have purified naraku when meilin was holding onto her saying how scared she was, meilin wouldnt have seen anything with her face pressed up against her mom and even if she did couldnt the fact be erased from her memory or something? this is a good (although confusing) story and i think old and new could be a great story as well. old and new has barely begun and there are enough differences that if you change meilin's name it could be a completly different story depending on how it progresses
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Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to rewrite chapter 22 heart to heart because chapter 22 is the same as 21 and i dont know what happend in 22 so can you please fix so i can read the real heart to heart chapter thanks Ps i love the story sofar i didnt finish yet beacause i had to tell about chapter 21 and 22 seeya and kee up the good work
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Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whaen are you going to update i want more inuyasha
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Reviewed By: charmed_demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
are u not aware that chapters 21 and 22 are exactly the same
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Reviewed By: blackscarlet47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay. i think you should leave Inuyasha and don't put him with anyone and put Boton with Hiei. great story, by the way
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 02:15 CDT
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I luv ur story its soooo cool!!! Are u thinking about making inu and botan a couple?? Neways please add more chappies!!!!
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 14:44 CDT
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great up date soon ok
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