"Unbearable Silence" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 19:11 CST Comment/Review: I was so happy when I found there was a sequel to "Garden of Balck Roses". This was even better then the first. The way you write is like poetry, everything seems to flow and there are no rough edges, which I have a lot in my writing. At the very end you had me nearly crying. GREAT WORK! You are very talented. |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 19:54 CST Comment/Review: I just wanted to add that I gave this story a "10" as well. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks On: November 04, 2001 10:01 CST Comment/Review: That...WAS BEAUTIFUL!! I swear I almost cried! I really liked how Trunks put his pride aside and cried for his love! You're a pretty good writer! |
Reviewed By: Pan-chan On: November 17, 2001 12:51 CST Comment/Review: This was so beautiful i think it was cool & nice when Trunks push his pride away to cry for the one he loved & was not ashamde to do so. right more please i love t/p fanfics |