| "Please help!!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: evilflynmonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 23:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
i just read your story, and it seems like it could get really good, hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 01:31 CST
Comment/Review:
intersting story thus far, I'd love to see the chapters a bit longer. Looks like you are off to a good start, can't wait to see how this plays out. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i find it intresting that you have placed KAgome having a father figure into the cannon script. its intresting. i think you need to be a little more detailed in your description of waht's going on and maybe internalize the though process of Kagome or the others. dont' rush through it, just enjoy writing. i have a feeling that this is going good places, just keep it up!
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