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| "Slices of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: CHAPTER 12
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to annoy you but I missed out reading chapter 12 and I just had to leave another review! This one is definitely my favourite! Small but it had so much meaning! I really like how you had the dark side of Vegeta wanting Bulma to love him, I think your perception of Vegeta is very true. Wow, I loved that, strange as it was so small, but I think I'll add it to my favourites.
| Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, I especialy liked 'best friends', 'beautiful', and 'midnight meeting' For some reason I could really imagine the latter to be Bulma and Vegeta. I liked beautiful because it was really heartwarming. And best friends was just too cute! Do some more!
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