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Title: ohh
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter! Well, i love all of them! Vegeta-sei is repairing itself...Vegeta and Bulma are all lovey-dovey! Oh, must review more!
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Title: bwehehehehe
Reviewed By: vanness On: September 05, 2005 12:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter is excellent! So dark and evil and stuff. I just got done reading all of your chapters, so now Im going to go back and review them all!
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: September 04, 2005 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, well done Gohan's Onna. This is an original, brilliant piece of fanfiction. You kept me hooked from the beginning, immense creativity. I adore the mystery and the bond between Vegeta and Bulma. You make his seem, "humane", yet you still give him that feral edge, without making him totally OOC. You do the same with Bulma, that was a really great scene, where she beat the HFIL out of her attacker, I could feel her emotions and her need to protect her *baby*. You make Bulma vulnerable, yet fierce and fiesty at the same time. Brilliant, is all I have to say. Bura400
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Title: Hail Empress of Evil!
Reviewed By: Ozzy4Prez666 On: August 30, 2005 12:26 EDT
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Every time I read or re-read a chapter, it radiates evilness. It's addicting. Does your evilness know any limitations? Not a chance! Keep it up, O Evil One!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta'sMate(not logged in) On: August 27, 2005 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~grabs Onna and shakes her~ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!? ~shakes her some more~ TELL ME DAMNIT!!!! I am like dying here! Such a good chapter and you have got to be the Emperess of EVIL CLIFFHANGERS!!!! GAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!! The meaness of that ending is killing me! UPDATE SOON!!!!! ~drumms fingers on the desk top, waiting impatiently~
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 23:29 EDT
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NONONONONO your evil >.< (JK) this was a very very good chapter just like you said it would be. i'm so happy to have read it.. damn i still want to know who's behind all of this. and what of bulma whats tpo happen to her. oh i don't want them to hurt her no more :( Great chapter can't wait to read more...update soon..
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Title: AHHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: Trisha not logged On: August 26, 2005 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN that was goood!!!! You're good...and evil *pouts* hahaha damn i can't believe all the ish that's happening. poor vegeta. i hope he's ok. hmm maybe he wont remember anything? DARN i hope Bulma's ok. i hope she won't lose her baby again or anything. UGH! pls update soon. i hate evil cliffies!!
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:15 EDT
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WTF >.< who is it and why is this happening to them. i hope bulma doesn't lose the baby this time. sad chapter with alot of action, and what about yamcha?????? what did he have to do with this or will he help the King???? damnit update soon *HUGS*
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Reviewed By: pyshoitic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 15:12 EDT
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Aww!Its so sad!I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: geminisoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to say that I LOVE all of your fan fics and have been waiting forever for you to update your Goku and ChiChi story! :) I read the Prince and Princess Diaries on your website and started to read King and Queen Diaries there, but I think you skipped the real Chapter Four and put Chapter Five there, and I got confused so I came to read it here, lol. I like the fact that you are continuing Bulma and Vegeta's life in this way, because after I finished Prince and Princess Diaries, I was wondering where Yamcha had gone. Although, I was upset when Bulma lost their first baby, and am upset that she might lose the second. I know that you as a writer want to make your readers feel what the characters are feeling and you do that beautifully, however, I just don't like miscarriges, it's so sad for whoever it happens to. But I understand why you are using it in your story. I am excited to see what aill happen next, and I hope you update soon! I never get any reviews on my story either, so I know how you feel. I don't think I've updated for months because I am waiting for one more review, lol. -Sara (I am at the Salon too under the name girlinthecurl03) ^_^
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Title: 0_o
Reviewed By: Vegetachick98 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I just finished reading the prince and princess one and I was in tears at some of the chapters. I was so happy when I found out there was a sequal. I like this story alot and I can't wait for the next Chapter. You are one of the best writers I've seen! Keep up the good work. I have a B/V fic out to Email me sometime Lena_blue9891@ yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Fubuplayer2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 07:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow will she every have have a baby. this is going to be a big story. and i know that each chapter will be great and better then the last one. take your time cause thats when the best ideas come.
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: sally alane On: June 15, 2005 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter...even if it is yet another cliff-hanger. Your creativity never fails to impress. Please update and update soon!
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Title: Weo!
Reviewed By: Buggi On: June 15, 2005 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done it again! I love the way you write and the story is so good. Your passionate about this story and it gets better every time I read it! Keep up the great work and I hope you update soon! Ja'Ne!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 15, 2005 03:00 EDT
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OMG... I'm so sad for bulma... wow... poor girl... I hope she and the baby are fine
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