| "The King and Queen Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in. AGAIN) On: June 14, 2005 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admrire Bulma just as much as I feel sorry for her right now >_< Who was that motherffffckrrrr who took her, i swear..put me in your fic and ill kick his ass!! LOL that was excellent, don't even worry about taking long to update, what matters is that you DO and you make sure that your satisfied with what you wrote, cuz if your not satisfied, then we wont be satisfied XD
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Reviewed By: Vegetas Mate(not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAHHH!!!!! ~looks harried~ What the hell was that!? I swear that you have a very deep sinister streak in side that creative little head of yours! Love the chapter, kinda hate that it took so long to get here but, it was great. Can they never be happy? I hope that whomever 'roughed her up a bit' gets a serious ass kicking from Vegea as well as the rest of the Royal Guard! Bulma already got a piece of him so, YEAH BULMA! UPDATE! Love ya babe! Vegeta's Mate
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 21:45 EDT
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Ooooh this is very bad *cries* cause i realy don't like cliffhangers ^^.. PLEASE let the baby be ok. Yes Bulma fought back and she should have shes strong. ARRHHHH please update ok...Hugs to you Gohan Onna for your kind words ...I wonder if that was Yamcha. and if it was i'm glad that bulma wacked him where the sun doesn't shine ^^ And Vegeta to show to them all just how much he loves her that was the BEST.........
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Title: king and queen diaries
Reviewed By: sally alane On: May 20, 2005 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have such an ejoyable writing style as well as so much imagination! Keep writing!
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Trisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS EVIL! EVIL I TELL YA. MAN THE SUSPENSE IS KILLIN ME! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE OR ELSE...UH, WELL THERE'S REALLY NOTHING I CAN DO. I BET THAT WAS YAMCHA HUH? U MENTIONED SOMETHING IN THE PROLOGUE THAT YAMCHA HAS A HIDDEN PLACE SOMEWHERE, SO IM THINKING THAT'S HIM WHO STOLE HER THAT BASTARD. I HOPE U UPDATE REAL SOON.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Trisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so sad. i cant believe they lost their baby. im pretty sure that mother effin yamcha pushed her. i mean, who else couldve done it? a ghost?! i dont think so. pls let me be right cuz i want yamchas ass to pay. i want vegeta to kick his sorry ass. sorry if i use the A word i meant donkey.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Trisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is so eff'n good. i had a feeling shes pregnant. was that yamcha who just attacked her? imma go read the next chapter now
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Trisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Yamcha is such a pervert lol. i cannot believe he watches them have sex. that's so creepy lol he's so evil what a loser. anyway the chapter was excellent!!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 20:38 EDT
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Girl i love you lemons BTW.. Ok who has her and whats going on...>.< need update and soon WOMEN ^^...Maria
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 09, 2005 01:41 EDT
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omg... well I can't wait to see what happens
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Title: NNNOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: SKC On: May 08, 2005 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNOOOO!!!! why did you have to end there. I love your stories so much. Please update as soon as you can. BTW I love your die list. XD
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Reviewed By: Fubuplayer2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
so happy that you update the story. cant wait to read more.
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Title: Update!!!
Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it!!! I clasify it as my favorite AU I've read, and tied for second favorite fanfic ever!!! I am totally obsessed and really wish you would update soon so I can find out what happens!!! PLEASE!!!
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Title: okay okay
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 31, 2005 14:23 EST
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this is going to drive me crazy until you update this story, well i have to be going now!
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Reviewed By: Ra Tai 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 11:38 EST
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I hope you write a chapter soon, because I know Vegeta is going to kick some ass for his wife's injury. This story and the last one is wonderful. Please update.
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