| "Piss me off and Die" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazylillian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 22:21 CDT
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i love the story. but i wish u would finish it.
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Reviewed By: ani_cat_candy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you! This story is SO awesome! It has inspired me to write my first fanfiction.. Although, I know it's likely to not be anywhere NEAR as good as this one..
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Reviewed By: kuro fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Revenge is a dish best served cold. ice cold. Very well done, though your grammer could use a bit of work. I still think it is an intriging story. But what i really want is for Seras to go apeshit on some poor idiot's ass.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 15:43 CDT
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okay, this is the review for chapt 40... I have to say, nice use of artistic licence with Alucard's nickname and his countermeasure to it.. As well as Lillian's dream.. very vivid and easy to picture in your mind, very well done!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 06:30 CDT
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Nice new chapt, i meant 39... i can't read the otherone due to current time constrains and i have to go, i'll leave another review when i can though, so i'll leave you with congratulations at your story and it is excelent the way you answer questions the reader has pretty much as if you are talking yourself, not Alucard... while still retaining Alucard's crazy/bloodthirsty side.. well done!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 19:08 CST
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Amazing story you've written here and I hope you write more to it, I want to see the consequences are of what has already happened. Also I would love to find out how the blood of Alucard ran through Integra's children and grandchild.
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: Amythyst [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:23 CDT
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Very well done, your are getting better and better at creating cliffies..... i'll keep reading if you continue this story./
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ratings so far.... You need to change how you write because in some chapters words are slice into little letters and it becomes annoying after a while.... I see multaple spelling mistakes. However on the whole I enjoyed this stiry and hope you will continue it.... And yes.... Vampire saliva is regenerative..... If it wasn't i would have many more scars then i have now....... I am strange but that is only by your own standards not my own or others...... Please continue this story.
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 11:51 CDT
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i'm glad your finally updating again. but then i've been gone for a while, so there you go... love the chapters i've missed...
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Reviewed By: JenLovesPip [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really really glad that you've started updating this fanfic. I've enjoyed it greatly. Keep up the wonderous work my dear.
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Title: Wicked
Reviewed By: Morality [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like the little devil, she is so spicy,yet not totally out of control. She pulls herself together when it is really necessary, and that is why I like her. Alucard is a little bit too sweet, but this suits the situation most of the time. I cannot wate the next chapter to arrive.
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 11:44 CDT
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Hello, i don't have much to say (partly cause i'm in the midle of a graphic design class and i'm acctually suposted to be graphicly designing...) except i really do like this story, please updated!!!!!!! Ahhhh, i have to go!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evil person give a clif hanger .... AHHHHHH more soon, or else. evil person. i love the stoyry write more i hunt u dont and harm u... badly. :D smiles
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Reviewed By: anaki (nli) On: September 23, 2005 06:29 CDT
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noooo! evil cliffie! you gotta update soon!
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