| "Miracle?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: :) intrigued
Reviewed By: me On: February 12, 2005 00:28 CST
Comment/Review:
i almost passed this story over, b/c mpreg tends to be so... disturbingly out there. i really *don't* think that most men would be thrilled with the idea of having a child - even if it were their own. i think i read somewhere that the basic sub-psychology to slash fiction is to feminize men and if that holds any truth (which i only partially agree with) then mpreg stories are the extreme of that. i really like what you are going for with this - it's really interesting to explore. i am somewhat surprised that Aya is the only one freaked by the baby - especially if it is possibly Massafumi's creation. i would be curious to know more about the ...'conception' as it were. i think this is definitely worth more exploration. cool idea :)
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Reviewed By: Silverone [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admire this idea lots. I always hated the way mpreg was presented in such glowing terms. Normal pregancy isn't always a happy experience, so why should it be for men, who have grown up all their lives never even concieving of the possiblity?
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