Reviewed By: Zowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 00:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Aw, the ending was so sweet, I really liked it. Heero seemed a bit ooc at times, but given the nature of the story that's to be expected. I sort of wish you had included more about how it all happened, you know just a bit about the party and morning after. anyway, nice job, i really enjoyed it. |