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| "New Moon Kingdom" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Threads
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is a fairly good fiction. great creativity, very much enjoyment, but a bit rushed, like chaosrune said. In any case, which thread was it that you found this on? I occasionally read Ranma's addventures, but I've yet to come across this one.
| Reviewed By: ChaosRune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this fic has a lot of potential, but you are rushing things too much, I suggest that you slow down, like explain when Ranma was send to Jade for example, if you do that, this can be a great fanfic
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