Reviewed By: Kitsuki On: February 16, 2005 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This could be turned into some excellent poetry. (But slashing your wrist is probably not going to kill you fyi... he needs to OD on aspirin too, and probably cut both wrists, and vertically, not horizontally. If it's horizontal you have to cut through tendons. OUCH!) Basically, if he wanted to die, he needs to pick another means! Anyway, that took way too long! I like it! You might try adding some imagery and or some violet descrpitions.
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