| "Genie in a Bottle" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: April 23, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please have Yami wish for her to become human.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: April 22, 2005 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
yea, another pro Tea story! i think you have the hots for Tea. hey, if you do, join the club. I love the legs. anyhow, good start, and thank god that not every story out there is yaoi. There IS the possibility that Yami/Atemu might be straight, ya know!
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Title: resnonse
Reviewed By: Lord_InuYasha24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, that was my phycotic side. Even though i have to agree with him. You are a lost cause.
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Reviewed By: Crimson Alessa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I thought this story was worthy and rather touching, but although this, the grammar is in need for checking and there should be some work on paragraphs. Also, although the description is vastly well written, there is some places where some more could fit, without them, some sentences were just kind of odd sounding, as it was not grammared the best of ways and there were some spelling errors. This isn't a bad thing, every writer has something they need to polish up on, if I didn't point these out, what good of a writer would you be if you can't have knowledge of what you need to work on, so please don't get mad at me. Though, good point is, there's a good feeling of this story and it has a rich potential, so stay to it, your doing well. :)
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Title: Hatered of Anzu
Reviewed By: Lord InuYasha On: March 18, 2005 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anzu sucks. She is a slut. She should die every day like that kenny kid on south park. If you have a problem, tell me. Reveiw one of my stories. My User name is Lord_InuYasha24.
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Reviewed By: pixi On: February 21, 2005 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
What the crap!!!it was supposed to be like a sex fanfic and there's NO SEX?!?!?!?! that's werid and crazy.But if you add a couple of chapters then maybe you would get more better reviews
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooo this is REALLY good!!! plz update soon i luv how this fic is goin so far!!!
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Title: Genie in a Bottle
Reviewed By: Diamond84 On: February 15, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Pharaoh Atemu and Anzu were cute couple. But when are you going to put next chapter and when the pharaoh and Anzu as Genie will meet?
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