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| "Forget Me Not" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Zeva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please don't forget about this story. It's to good! Having Miriam go with Pipin or with Frodo is a decision only you can make make. I kind of want Miriam to go with Pipin, but maybe going with Frodo would make it harder when he has to leave. Oh well...Both options have great potential. You MUST continue this story!
| Reviewed By: Zeva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Finally, an author who knows how to spell, can write good dialoge, and understands how to use paragraphs! I loved reading what you have so far (espesially the Frodo romance). Your writing flows fairly smoothly and is easy to read. It ties in with the movie very well and I look forward to your next chapter. Good luck with your story!
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