| "Sengoku Jidai University" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dustychic On: May 06, 2005 23:21 CDT
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I l-u-v-e-d your story it was off the chain ^_^. I needed something to make me laugh and your story did just that. I'm such a weirdo sometimes I'm probably the only one who laughed at the joke about Kaede's old run/broke down computer ^ ~ LOL. I think this story is tight, but one thing homie - Remember your timeline or it will upset the whole story. Think about it… If Inuyasha really was sealed to the tree decades ago would he really know about internet compatibility? But remember its your story and I really am not trying to be a smart butt. Its your story, your life, your world, I'm just a squirrel trying to get a nut ^_^. Update soon and I'll bug you with another review.
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: May 06, 2005 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I like the center as well, but this one has really sucked me in! I can't wait to see where you'll go with it! Ps thank God there is no way to marry someone with out their concent! that would be bad.
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Title: Sengoku Jidai University
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 22:25 CDT
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That was a bit slow but definitely better than what I would make it sound like...I love the parts you tossed in with the ramen, the essay on Sess, and the Porche. I can barely wait for the next chapter but as long as you make it worth the wait, I'm sure I'll be happy enough to just shut up and sit here^^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 05, 2005 17:19 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Glad to see the thunder brothers passing went quietly, those two were always such a pain... Ramen for protection...that's a new one. Interesting way of getting the two of them to continue to get closer...I can't help but wonder if Kagome will be going home alone... Look forwards to seeing what happens next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:36 CDT
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So what's a girl to do? She can't return the car until after the holidays so it would be understandable,but so very, very wrong, to use it during vacation. Inuyasha sure seems to spend a lot of time hanging out with the humans. Doesn't het get grief for that?
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 05, 2005 09:39 CDT
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great job! i'm so glad you've updated. i love this fic!
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Reviewed By: ReaderX On: May 03, 2005 01:36 CDT
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I'm pretty picky with InuYasha fanfics, so when I say that this is great fanfic, I mean it! I'm actually *patiently* waiting for the next chapter! How did you do that?! Keep up the fabulous work!
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Title: please updata REALLY SOON
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story it's turning out great and it is really good a different plot but it flows and it enjoy able. I thinks it's cute how Inuyasha likes Kagome already because if they go out that would be better, because they are so cute together. I also like how you made a collage demon school that swet but i need to know what happens to Kagome please please updata soon. I enjoyed this story because it's creative and enjoy able.
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 12:30 CDT
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its been so long since you updated..I hope nothing fatal happened..maybe its just a major writeres block..or maybe its trying to keep school marks up? anyways hope youre alright!Im starting to die from not being able to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: rawben... On: April 08, 2005 16:56 CDT
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aww! this is good... is it a sess/rin also?
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 02:39 CST
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Ive read the first two chapters at least five times now god youre a great writer wish you would update soon..I LOVE YOUR STORY
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: March 01, 2005 09:48 CST
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hope you update soon! i like this story.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 12:26 CST
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UPDATE SOON PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 09:33 CST
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Hmmm...I think this story is gonna be good. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Keep Updating.
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