| "True Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: UMM...
Reviewed By: Raven-Daugter of Zarich! On: July 23, 2005 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i really liked the fanfic but the only problem i saw was that i just can't imagine vergil with a girl and having tears!!!(even though i know it's a fanfic, and that's the whole point)
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Reviewed By: A reader On: May 26, 2005 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is a decent attempt at writing romance, but the fic feels like it is incomplete. Something that could improve it would be to add some conflict with the two characters. Maybe you can have someone come between them or create some problem that both of them have to go through. Having them fall in love with each other the instant they meet is pretty farfetched. If you add reasons why they fell in love with each other, that would help make your story more believable.
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