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| "Feelings of Wrongness?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: MangaChicknotsigned in On: February 14, 2005 18:22 CST
Comment/Review:
WAgh...this is confusing...is it really going to be a heero and quat fic? Anyway, maybe insert who's talking what with something like this, just to make it less confusing. otherwise, it's interesting. Will you write more?
| Reviewed By: Salvacion On: February 14, 2005 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the beginning of what you've written, please put more up soon. Just one thing though. Isn't this from the viewpoint of Duo? And if it is..you might want to change that part where he says he met 02,03,04,05 qnd Peacecraft.
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