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| "Theories: Beast of Burden" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: skyfire_katana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Looks up at ratings* I ::hate:: giving tens. It makes them seem underrated. I don't give them very often. Your story is original and creative. I enjoyed it a lot. Unlike a whole bunch of other annoying crossovers (and stories in general) your spelling and grammar is readable, and your style is fun and easy to read. The plot is something new, and believable. It's one of those realistic every day life things (kinda) and that's refreshing to see. Great job on an excellent fic.
| Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 18:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Not too shabby for a crossover fic, if i do say so myself. I look forward to the next stories in this series and i sincerely hope you are not into the whole slash-type pairings. (I am a firm believer that Kurama and Hiei are JUST friends) Shizuru is my all-time favorite female YYH character (which, now that i really think about it isn't saying too much ^^;) and I'm excited you made her the main character in this. i also deeply appreciate that you did not make the character Lupin appear as some shabby old man, shamefully in the way that the movie did. He is much more the younger-man-with-premature-stress type. Thank you! Keep writing!
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