| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: Samric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 17:10 CST
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I am SO glad that you did this--Bchan's website is gone and this story isn't loaded on her aff account! I have been going crazy looking for this!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: kira_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOOOOOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been looking for this fic since forever, and now I have finally found it again... THANKS!!!
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Reviewed By: hellsfallenangle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 18:47 CDT
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i am new but i got a question is hiei and kurama gay and i thought your story was great!!!!! oh and my brother(who is a big pervert)says to tell him what they do while making love.0.o
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 19:56 CST
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O_O You are a amazing writer I love it. And to boot I dident hafta wait for you to update do you plan a secqal? Aneway I love it and I want you to write more mabey a bit more detail on the lomons ^_~ Im sucj a pervert hehehe.
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Reviewed By: kurama idol [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 19:02 CDT
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i have actually read this story before, about a year ago. I can't believe i actually found it again! i've been looking for it for soooooo long!
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Reviewed By: Maya2.0 On: July 13, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was so sweet!I love it when these fics have a lot of conflicts. It was great! Please make a sequel. Please!!! thank you! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: HieiLover#? On: May 31, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was great! Clever, cute, and original!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooooo good. But the thing said it was a prologue, does that mean there's more to come? I really think you should write a sequel, if you haven't already. This was sooooo good. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: lilsaiyingirl On: February 16, 2004 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really liked yur fic i like the way you pu t in the detail and all the other shit but still great job
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Reviewed By: lilsiayingirl On: February 16, 2004 00:53 CST
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Title: Akuto
Reviewed By: Akuto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Style and all but Spelling and Grammer were good because you forgot to put thoughts between a pair of " ' " (i.e. if that looks weird: "Blah blah blah," said Kurama. 'I hope such and such Hiei such and such'. If you knew before I wrote this, sorry. Couldn't figure if that sounded right or not.)
One thing though - can you send this story to me? The last part is scrambled into codes. If it's located at that site you have at the bottom, well her links aren't working it seems. I would like to finish the story, please! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good! I can't really scream about how much I love it, however... You didn't write it, so I dont feal very comfertable. But I will say some stuff anyway! Thank you for posting it, I absalutly loved it! It gave me a lot to think about! I have never read anything like it, it is the most _interesting_ fanfiction I have ever read! I am not exaterating! Wouldn't that be interesting... Hiei half girl? I really loved it. I really like all of the children as well. I do think that there should be a sequel! It took me about 4 and a half hours to read it. I really liked it!!!!! I loved it, in fact! It was a it to different to be my favorite fanfic, but I really did love it! ME LOVE IT SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will go to that website!!!!!! BYE-CHU!!! HIEI AND KURAMA FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
***Otaku~Hoshi, one of Hiei X Kurama's biggest fans. You have to like them, they are cute, wonderful, and look great together*** |
Reviewed By: Trina On: June 14, 2003 03:46 CDT
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This is one of my fav yyh fanfics. I read this long time ago when I just started reading yyh fanfics and I stil think this is one of my favorite. The first time I read this It took me the days to read this because my dad wanted to use the computer alot. I was surprised that I could read this that fast today It took me five hours with brakes and food but I still read at the same time I can muti task at some things. This story is one of the best there should be a sequil or something. I love the Idea too. I'm a big sap person I cried when I read some parts and got super angry at others I realy felt something when I read this. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though you have obviously written this a long time ago and probably wonrt' read my review, this is a great story! I love it! I never thought of Hiei being a girl, but it was a really good idea! Could you maybe make a sequel to this? |
Reviewed By: TheBlackRose On: February 09, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is an awesome fic! Although, i think that Hiei/Yuuki should have left Kurama out to dry for a while and reject him. Then eventually get back together. It was still great none the less! I love it!!! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 08:56 CST
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*pingpong* I happen to be a Hiei fan. Hiei is mine! no one can have him! /wailing/
*Kurama* he's mine!
*pingpong* mine!
*Kurama* Mine!
/both having a tug of war of hiei/
*Hiei* -_-....O.O
*pingpong* Remember Kurama, I have the power to torture you if don't give the short fire demon to me... ^_^
/Kurama hands Hiei over/
*Pingpong* ^_^ /cuddling Hiei/ |
Reviewed By: kurama rose On: July 10, 2002 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic i ever read !this story was perfect!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kiriska [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I. Love. This. Story! I spent almost 3 hours reading it and snapping at my little brothers when they came to bother me! I love everything about it. All the characters, EVERYTHING! XDD It's gonna be the first on my favorite's list! HieixKurama forever! ^^ Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Sets On: July 05, 2002 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
B-chan is such a good writer. This was the first non crossover Yu Yu Hakusho fic I read about a 6 months ago. She was the one that slated my as a HieixKurama fan, although her other fics are hilarious! |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I never comment on people's spelling grammer or the style of writing. I'm pretty bad myself, but this is the #1 fic I ever read in ages! Actually it's only half a year but it's still good. Kurama and Hiei rules! |
Reviewed By: Rose Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2001 11:48 CST
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Found the site you were looking for. This is actually one of my favorite fics, though it could do with a beta reader for spelling and a bit of grammer. Here's the linkie! b-chan1.tripod.com/yyhfanfic.htm |
Reviewed By: MitsuiSelphie On: December 08, 2001 02:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this is one of the best fics i have ever read...well, it could use some editing in the grammar and spelling part, but its great, nevertheless! really! so creative! more people should come and read this.... |
