| "Anything, Anytime, Anywhere, For You" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: BattleCat91 On: June 16, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How many chapters are you going to write because everytime I finish one you add another. Anyways it is still really cool and it keeps you on the edge of your seat. It is really cool you have the ability to write such a story as this one.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Inuluvsu (Not Logged on) On: June 16, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Today ah friday cause I thought it was thursday. You are totally evil, breakig up a Star/Robin moment, and putting Terra in an akward postion, you evil person. And your welcome for the Idea. Whoa, a doctor in trainging itroduced TB to the hospitals, so they all might have them. I'm to lazy to sign on, lah lah. Oh you are also evil that your writing in summer not that I don't want you too it's just that I have camp for a month and 2 weeks so your story will pile up and I'll havr 6 to more alerts on it, yeah I get alerted when you update I like your story's so much although I don't like the R/BB part not a big fan *ducks at thrown rocks*although it's writtem good. Now why did I just tell ya that, well that's... oh yeah What's Titans West? Did you mean Titans East? Love Yah! :)
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Title: AGH!
Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 14:38 CDT
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Once again, you're evil. I was so absorbed with what was going on with Trigon/demon children that I forgot about Magus. WHY DID THEY NOT DESTROY THE GLOVE IMMEDIATLY??? And poor Raven... she needs a hug. and lots of them. Care to get Beast Boy on the case? And how will Raven get help from the pendant if her mother's dead. Why didn't Arella just heal Star in the beginning and Raven wouldn't have to go through all that. Did Raven and Arella get to talk a little while Star and Robin were in el astro plane-o? (hehe, I'm speaking Spanish like Cyborg) AGH. I need an update soon...and I'll be in Europe for the next two weeks and I will be checking internet cafes everyday to see the updates! SO THERE BETTER BE SOME SOON!!
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 13:23 CDT
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Sorry it posted twice it said missing info and I guess it wasn't you may delete.
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Title: Huh
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUH? isn't today a wensday, and your supposed to update on friday, well that's a good thing. OOO I gave you an idead wow which one? ok your story has made me cry laugh and now once quiver, u made me think star was gonna die and Robin tooo. u evil evil evil evil person, did I already say evil? Huh and now what will the next chapter be and are you gonna write during the summer? and can Raven cry? This messade will now self distruct in 5 4 3 2 1 what it didn't explode damn you replying damn you, Love yah! :) evil is one of your major traits keep it.
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Title: Huh
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUH? isn't today a wensday, and your supposed to update on friday, well that's a good thing. OOO I gave you an idead wow which one? ok your story has made me cry laugh and now once quiver, u made me think star was gonna die and Robin tooo. u evil evil evil evil person, did I already say evil? Huh and now what will the next chapter be and are you gonna write during the summer? and can Raven cry? This messade will now self distruct in 5 4 3 2 1 what it didn't explode damn you replying damn you, Love yah! :) evil is one of your major traits keep it.
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Reviewed By: dancrgrlttluvr On: June 11, 2005 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love your fanfic! You finally got the pairings right! I am introducing this fanfic to everyone I know that likes Teen Titans, and even some that don't.This is the best fanfic I've read in a good long while. Keep writing, you've got talent.
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Title: WHOA
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You evil evil person, Robin would never do that, not to starfire. Whaaaaa, No you're not evil but why oh why did you have to do that? you big meanie. Thank you for answering my questions and please for the sake of starfire update. Well I don't have to tell you, u always update on fridays. anyway You better be right about it being a good r/s chapter next time. Except it has to because he has to reconize that he was a bad boy. Wait when he was talking to Raven's mother she said that something was going to kill all of his friends is that something him? Cuz by the sounds of it he seems pretty evil hey maybe the jewel Raven has is going to help in some way, Ok before I go crazy, Love Yah :) and technally he is at least in the show cuz he's the only one who kinda is affected by mad mod
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Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 01:01 CDT
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AGH! All I have to say is that you are more evil than Trigon with that cliffie! And we still had no moments with Raven and BB. Which I am sad over. Although (I can't help it) I lauged when Robin threw Star over and turned. That was classic!! Sorry, I'm not really a Robin fan...and Star gets on my nerves. I would actually vote for a Cy/Bee pairing just because I don't really "know" Jinx. Plus I think that pairing would be a better twist. Or hey if you can bring back that chick (saraong or something) from Cyborg the Barbarian, that would be the coolest cause I thought she was great! Aw, but I'm still tripping about that ending you left us with...and the chapter was not long enough (GR!). Hey...are you still going to update tommorow (wicked grin). Cause I could use another dose of this story!!
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Title: More
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Left a short must make more, sorry i needed lunch and to be out of school. That was awsome still yes it was and whoa *looks round the room* raven's awsome, sorry most friends no I despise Raven but that was a whoa raven moment it made me like her scary scary. Still why is BB so easy to hypnotize? and did I miss something or is robin just not there? and Terra is not a project anymore yes that is the second time I said it, including my first short post. Yeah at school it limited me to 500 characters it suck I like writing long reviews. How did you know Raven's mother's name or did you just make it up? And who's singing the death song thingy? I know to many questions but hey that's what keep readers interested leaving them questions except me I get mad well not at stories on the internet cause I can ask but at books when they don't explain enough and I don't get it. does that ever happen to you the writer is really bad at explaining? Ok yeah I need to get back to my project the Cape Cod project, one bad things of field trips we have projects after them and this one a pain in the, won't say bad word kid friendly enviorment. Love Yah! :) And I said long
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Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome you don't know how long I've been waiting for the next. Awsome and yes cape cod is awsome. That was weird where's Robin? and Beast Boy is like so easy to hypnotize. cool and Yeah no more Terra project woo hooo. Uh huh and now since I'm in school I must go to lunch, Love Yah! :)
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Title: AGH!
Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?! On your LJ (yes, sorry I've looked you up) you said it'd be great for BB/Rae fans but I DO NOT THINK that trying to kill each other is very nice!! You had me on the edge of my seat too I was jumping up and down with the part Raven never got to three, and Beast Boy never finished begging. Because I thought that this mean that POSSIBLY there was going to be this huge kiss, but there WASN'T it was her evil sister. And btw…where's Cyborg in all of this? I always feel so sorry for him… he needs a little lovin. On a completely different note, I am AMAZED at your writing skill, especially considering how young you are. You're a wonderful writer and I really look forward to your story. Actually I was re-reading the entire thing when I saw the new chapter had been added. The chapter that I've been waiting for and checking twice a day for!! It was driving me insane!
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: goddessruling On: May 27, 2005 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY. First of all, it's cruel to make us wait that long...it's like waiting for Harry Potter. This time the reading didn't take to long...my mother was interrupting me trying to get me to fix her computer. But I'm VERY excited about this fic, and I'm SO happy Raven got her body back. I really like the fact that Beast Boy calls her Rae...I haven't seen enough of the series to know if you created that or if it's from the show. But I do have to say, I hope they get out of Gotham soon...I'm not really a Batgirl fan or a Terra fan. Although they do add drama, and I love the drama!
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Title: sorry forgot the link
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 16:29 CDT
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here it is http://s4.invisionfree.com/randsshrine/index.php?s=d4adabc2d248f307800074d9 17f58f0c&showtopic=3924&hl= It's good and sorry I'm spacing out and suffering from ah Low Self Esteem minature golf syndrom I had a 35 at the 4th hole
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Title: *yawn* Great
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I just got back from a three day school feild trip to cape cod it was so fun even though it rained, alot. Great chapter it's awsome, oh poor terra seeing all the reunited lovers unite and her first love with someone else, *yawn* I am still tired I can't belive It i guess that's what I guess. You stayed to you word update on fridays that's a happy thing. You know what, i've already seen episodes ah Stranded, and Mother May Eye here If you don't want to wait here's the site from where I got the links oh if you want to find me there my screen name there is "stars of the sun" Stranded is a big starfire/robin episode and I mean big, Love yah! :)
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