Title: none Reviewed By:Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 08:45 CST Comment/Review: it was a good story..but...(please don't kill me for saying this, i'm a critic to everyone) it seems like it was extreamly rushed and it...uh...*cowars and holds up shield* it also seemed a little umm...corny (for lack of a better word) please don't hate me!!!!! *whimpers*